Good story. Though Piccolo doesn't really do much, I like it, I like the first 3 chapters the best so far, do continue.

And chaos_bardock & nobody, you two nuckle heads could tell Sevetenks the Ultimate F what is so rotten about the story instead of saying stuff like "This is crap I hope you quit" and stuff like that. Meh, like those two are gonna read this one, I don't why I bother.

stupid

why would he want to fight everything... its a waste of time and talent

your writing is crap i hope you quit

*drooling* must read some more stories. it just keeps on getting better

I think it was a pretty funny story.