That was kinda short, but I really loved it!

Juliet

O_O? Umm, its okay. Very short though.

what's purgatory mean? oh well. so that's the end of the story, or just the chapter? if just the end of the chapter, then please do update again, if end of story, this was very enjoyable. Byezie!

Very interesting. The plot seems to be profound. Furthermore, you should put more detail in the story, but I like it the way its heading. You are off to an excellant start as most fanfics I've seen hardly get anywhere. I see no flaws in your words and I also like the way you make it in Harry's Perspective.

Hope to see more of it. :) and continue. No matter what other people say. It's your story. :)

Fuzzy Angel

okay... this was weird... is it over?

I felt like this first chapter wasn't long enough and didn't have enough description. It's a really cool idea though. Keep going.

oh freaky! does harry get away?... this could be a good story! you should think about it...