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| dddynamite 2006-08-19 ch 1,  | abuseAw very awsome and really well writen! |
| jambled 2006-08-03 ch 1, | abuseHey hon that was great! really liked it! |
| valerie 2005-12-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just love it! it is fun and cute and "soft", I just wish we could get some of that too on the show! congrats val |
| Rambo2 2005-11-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI absolutely loved it!! You are such a good writer!! I'm going to tell all my friends how original and orthentic your stories are!! Thankyou for the great read!! Rambo2 (coldcasesource1) |
| AthenaIceGoddess 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abuseIt was good. I like a tad more fluff, but that's just me. Very good story! |
| Little Tussi 2005-06-24 ch 1, | abuse*Haves a huge grin over face* Loved it. |
| bloodredcherry 2005-01-11 ch 1, | abuse"Yare tah bestest girlfriend evah!" She exclaimed That made me laugh, a little ooc but still totally hilarious! i mean. who's really in character when they're intoxicated anyway? A fandom is not complete without at least one "drunken" story :-D, or at least in my opinion. Anyway! This is a great story!! Hurrah for Scotty/Lily. :-D |
| MaryRose 2004-12-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was a really good story. |
| LiRA 2004-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseIncredibly cute story, which would usually make me ill, but it's Scotty, so it's ok. No, I actually liked this. You write very well, and besides a few typos, it was generally a great read. Cheers. Write more. LiRA |
| Jessa4865 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful! I love Scotty's reaction to the cats (I'm a cat lady myself) and I love Protective!Scotty. This calls for a sequel... maybe a drunk Scotty being nursed back to health by Lil? Please continue it! Jessa |
| Wolf Jade 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseit was cute, i saw nothing wrong with it. keep up the good work. |
| Erica 2004-11-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked that story, but if you don't like the ending you could always keep it going...I wouldn't argue. =) It seems like a good beginning to a longer story. |
| Tati aka Trinity 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseI loved this!! You can't just end it like that!! You have to explain those things she was saying while she was drunk!! I'm assuming the "liar" is her father, but I need to know the details.(please!) oh, the drunken Lilly scenes were too funny!! loved!! (Lilly trying to find her knee under the seat...lol) Also,I'd love to read the story of L/S investigating the murder of Caitlin Sweeten, I think it would be a good fic. Again, great fic, I hope you'll write more soon. |
| adiklina 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusenice start! love seeing lily drunk!.. good job on it.. at least you had the guts to post your story while i on the other hand.. dont.. plz do continue writing L/S fics... i love reading them... are you gonna update the chapter or is this the end? |
| BeAuTiFuLlIfE 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abusehey! this was well written... not the best ending. but, okay. i think the only thing i didnt get about this was the whole thing that lily would probably have been more responisible with her alchol. but that just me. after all, this is fanfiction and it could be lily out of chraracter. *shrug* well, written. i would love to read more of your stories... if you want a beta-reader im avalible. just e-mail me. (its on my 'home page'. good story! keep up the good work. *btw* what is your first language? |