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MinervaEvenstar
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseNo offense intended, but it seemed too cutesy to be in character to me. I liked the ribbon bit, though.
legrandvisage
2005-09-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was really, really great. And hilarious - "Did EVERYONE know he was gay?" Why have only 7 people reviewed this? I must fav it to spread the word...
shaychana
2005-02-11
ch 1,
abusethanks for reading and reviewing corpus christi. i really don't think i can thank you enough for being brave enough to read necro.

now for your fic. aww, severus/remus. oh, how my shippy heart squees. i liked the brown/black argument, and the idea of salazar as a gamepiece. the hair discussion made me laugh.

a couple of points for your consideration: 1. i think you confused through and threw in "Finally he through his piece to the floor", 2. when is this fic supposed to take place? pre-prank or post-prank? because pre-prank, i doubt severus would know of remus being a werewolf, and post-prank, i doubt he would be quite so friendly to remus. “Pureblood Slytherin Sev likes poor little werewolf me.” is a cute line but doesn't seem consistent with canon.
TrueBlueTiz
2005-01-11
ch 1,
abuse*rocks out to the song* Yeah! I really hope this wins on the deviantart BeastofFire story contest! If I have it my way, it will!
battlescar
2004-12-04
ch 1,
abusehahaha this was so painfully cute! i liked it. great song, too! the cars are pretty awesome.

we all know this would happen if the two ever really had some time alone... it's my belief the picking on snape was mostly on sirius and james' behalf, anyway

snupin lurve ~
MajinSakuko
2004-11-29
ch 1,
abusevery nice and sweet. And the song at the end: who was the singer? My sister has a version of James Marsters
hipa
2004-11-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseSweet! I liked!
There is way too little Remy/Sev stories in here and those two are just so perfect together.
BUT RIBBONS AREN´T GIRLY!
...I think...
all aesthetics
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseHee hee hee, this is so cool. Excellent story paired up with an excellent songs. One of my favorites ^.^
Dreamer'sWasteland
2004-11-19
ch 1,
abuseI liked this. Personally I don't think that there are enough Sev/Remus fics out there. It was cute. And coming from me I'd say that's pretty good, seeing as I don't usually go for "cute".
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