this was fun and well written! good job.

Good plot, if a little mind-warp-y.

Keep writing!

This is really good, I'm surprised you don't have more reviews for it. I could so see Daniel talking Jack into the insane adventure, and would love to see the idea broadened.

That's it? Bummer. So many possibilities...

A good story, but a little short. If you send them back to Egypt, they could've done a lot more, like find a ZPM, for instance. :-)

Good work.

cool but you should have made it longer. it would have been cool if Jack and Daniel got sent back to ancient Egypt and all but when they were sent back to the Future they ended up with Evie and Rick and had to stop Imhotep.[Either the one from the Mummy or the one from The Mummy Returns] The excuse for imhotep not remembering them chould be that there is a gouald in him[duel punishment{goauld did some thing to anger the system lord}] or he is insane.

It's interesting of how the story went. The only thing wrong I see is that, it's O'Neill with two L's. There's another Colonel O'Neal with only one L. He's got no sense of humor. Other then that, it's good.

wow...that was interesting! um, I've run out of original comments for the day but that was a good story.

Hey that was pretty good, I would have liked to see Rick in it, maybe they could have gone back in time to when evie and rick were actually there? Oh well still a good story

If you ever write a sequel, time it so comes out just SLIGHTLY after the national premier of "the Mummy Returns." That way, you can include both the Scorpion King and spoiler warnings! As for THIS story; great job, all around.

Interesting, hope to read more.