i read about 6 of your stories i like them because there funny,goku calls vegita veggie,and i like chueys corner

OH MY GOD!

I almost killed myself laughing!

Please Could you write another story like this one?

OH MY GOD! i loved the part where piccolo said "Bite me"

Holy Jesus!I'm not even catolic and i'm saying these things!

PLEASE!I loved the shark parts!Damn!I almost never laugh!It's a freakin miracle! YOu know i almost had a heart attack at the early age of 14!just from reading this fic!

Please e-mail me if you write something like this (with the sharks and piccolo thing) again (my e mail is : or simply add me on your msn (if you want to)

This story was hilarious!

I can die a happy man now...i could die even happier if you wrote a sequel to this...if you already did please tell me...you have way to many stories...it's kinda hard to find the sequel to one of them

bye

PS this is oficially the longest review i have ever written.EVER!

Aw, poor Veggie lost his servant, AND got amnesia himself! Hehehe, so Piccolo was the bait to catch the shark, huh? Well, it worked! Anyways, great conclusion to a great ficcy! Ciao! _

I normally don't review every chapter, well not when the fics finished, but I had to! Man, this is getting funnier and funnier, especially the whole fish incident between Gohan and Piccolo! Yay, and Yamcha got beaten up! lol He annoys me! Well, onto the next and last chapter...the one where Vegeta loses his slave... *sniffle* lol _

Man, why didn't I read this sooner? This is hilarious, and I've only finished the first chapter! Yay, you use Bakarot too, so do I in my fics! Wow, Vegeta has really changed throughout your fics, just like in the series! One of you fics also said 'ass', the worst language I've read in one of your fics! I swear, I think the funniest part was " NOT _MY_ PEPSI! IT IS PERFECT! JUST LIKE ME! " I couldn't stop laughing, I LOVE Veggie's arrogance in this, and the way he treats Kakarot, and Bulma for that matter! Anyways, I wanna get back to reading the next chapters! Ciao! _

Man I love your stories. K

lol oh gosh that was hilarious hehe i really liked the part when goku and gohan went fishing lmao

very funny story

Actually, Piccolo would be unable to generate his head if the chark ate it. He can only regenerat himself if his head is whole. Therefor, someone would have to get the head out of the shark's mouth in order for Piccolo to regenerate a new body. Technically, Piccolo is dead now becuse of the shark. This was another funny chapter and I liked it a lot and I will read the next chapter as soon as school is out. Yippy! *runs off*

Actually, Vegeta and Goku are stronger than Gohan, but we'll let that little fact got for the time being. Oh! This is young Gohan. Okies. hm.. I don't think that Vegeta ever yells or screams that much. The characters are pretty much in character and Vegeta is using big words in your story, which is something that he does. I liked the plot and I enjoyed the story. Poor Goku though. *grin* Keep it up. "Holy Mr. Popos." rofl.Good one. This is a very funny story and I am going to read the next chapters! yeah!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *pause* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *pause* *pause* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *pause* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This was hilarious, and the ending... so ironic..

This was an absolutely BRILLIANT fic! I loved it! And about that poll thing...I like the chapters in your stories coz usually I can't read them all at once so I finish one chapter and start a new on another time!

Terrific!

i dont usualy like 2 flame people.

BUT VEGETA IN BUNNY SLIPPERS & I TEDDY BEAR

no sorry but he's REALY outy of character!

poor veggie! but, he could spear the sharks with his hair, so i guess its ok... *LoL* goodstory!