ummmm...what was the point?

A good ending to the other story ... but: "Luke sat beside me" could be fixed ...

Not that bad. The problem was that nothing interesting happened.

Well, there isn't much of a story, and I understand that it's hard to to one at this part in the, well, movie. ) I like the connection that Leia has with Luke, even though we know what it is. Still, watch the punctuation. You neec a ton more commas than what you are using. Keep writing!