I really hope you don't abandon this fic, I really love it and I'm dying to know what happens next. Please update!

oh wow! the part with Marik Ryou and the overseer was the best ever! bog WOW! unique! especially with the little slip that I have not noticed before otogi signaled it! hahaha

first kiss, and first hint that jou is not as dumb as it appears! oh miracle! I love it! hope to see more Malik Bakura and ryou Marik tho, I feel they don't have enough screen time XD

fantastic!

oh la la! I did not expect that! haha! that was stupid from yami, but he could not help it! this chapter is the wierder i've read so far... it's just so strange... poor Yami... I would really throw a tantrum if I were him! OMG

their encounter was so entertaining! Marik is really too smart for poor innocent Ryou! I like the way they talk to each other! you're a genius!

oh well! they all escaped the big mess! hmm... not for too long right? hehe
Great job on this fic
oh, yeah, and it's favorited already

aha! that dinner part will be oh so INTERESTING! problems are going to occur soon! hehe, I am devil for loving that XD

seto's past confused me, yet the propheshy is so well done! hehe
I like the little deal between Baku and mariku yeah

very nice! it sounds as if Marik and Ryou care about baku and malik? is that so?

that was fantastic! their interactions are geniunly awesome! more more MORE!

oww! excellent! they will not know so soon! ah! what a suspense!

wow! those two couple we are watching are really great together! oww how cute! I don't know what exactly made me laugh in this chapter, but it was really too funny!
oh, and I like the last suggestive scene! miam

oww! awesome choice of pairings! that should be interesting XD
so, the two are going to sleep on the same bed? Malik must think Bakura is trying to be nice rather than perverted ! haha funny, really

the final situation is really funny! Heavens! this is one hell of a story!