Ahh! Ahh! You have to write more of this! I want to see how that scumy ho Beka will handle what she made him do! :)

What Happens?! It was good, and sad. I feel that the 'creations' he makes never really
like him, or appreciate him to the fullest. But then, BEKA?!! Ow Really good

Aw, man, this is so sad! Well, at least someone else sees the lack of relationship between Harper and Beka. Thanks for the lovely (though sad) fic. ;D

Please write more for this! I love it! Yay, Harper angst galore!

:O I can't believe that harper would do that! He is never appreciated for what he does do. Very good story though, little depressing but good. Please write more!

Wow, that was good. Poor Harper though, he just can't seem to catch a break. I hope you continue this story, or like you said write a Beka POV. Harper owies and Beka guilt stories are some of my faves. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to more stories.

Poor Harper! Will someone come and save him in time!? I hope you continue, it's just plain mean to leave such a cliffhanger!

I like these lil' seefer fics that you are writing. I completely agree, I think they ended up writing Beka's character totally off this season - she was always pretty damn protective of Harper and this season its like they don't even know who he is. But I really like your stories!

I love this fic! (I haven't seen the new season yet and I don't really know what happens.) I think that Beka or Rhade's POV would be great. Please update soon!

i like this, but how come there was no mention of rhade's wife and kids being dead? i would have thought harper would have been at least a LITTLE sad about that! sorry, ranting of a completely obsessed Rhade fangirl. :D this was really, really good! i wouldn't have expected harper taking the 'kludge' comment so hard, but it was good! harper better not be dead! have either bekers or rhade (preferably my rhade!) save him! PLEASE!

Oh that was sad. Poor Harper.

I would have liked to have seen the Harper confront Rhade and Beka.

good story, poor harper.
Minor spelling problems, you have a good writing style, keep up the good work.

NO! Harper cant die. I'm gonna go cry now.

o my gosh. wow, just wow. thats so lovely. just, yeah. i mean wow. and its true too, beka really hasn't been there for him, and she should be. it's sad, but i can really picture harper doing this, stupuid writers from the show have to ** up eveyone's lives. well, i really like this, and whatever you decide to do next will be lovely as well. but, if i may, i would like to suggest a sequel to this about everyone's reactions to his suicide. like guilt, anger, or whatever you would want them to feel. kudos on the excellent job again!

This is the part where Beka walks in and tackles him at the last second, wrenching the gun away so that the shot misses, and when she asks him what he thought he was doing, he confronts her with all of his pain and rage, and she finally pulls her head out of her nether regions and realizes that she hasn't been there for him all this time, resolves to do better, and FIXES things, right? Right? Please?

Good stuff. I really liked; it made perfect sense. Please continue it (preferably without death being involved, but that's me being a rabid Harper fangirl)!