I am amazed at how many unique stories you have written. I love how long and detailed they are. Loved the ending of this fic.

YAY a happy ending ^^ i really loved this story, the twist, the characters, the evilness, EVERYTHING but my favorite part must have been when Seiya almost died...o.o...i don't like him when he's getting in the way of their relationship >:O lol, but seriously, my favorite part was when you did the whole plot twist and turned Haruka evil lol. It was good and i must say i didn't see that coming O.o. I loved this story, that's about it, and i KNEW Michiru would bear Haruka's child, no matter HOW weird that sounds LOL. but that's pretty awesome, i must say :) thanks for the story and keep writing!

I LOVE this fic. you should continue it. in all honesty if you change all the names of the salior moon characters i really think you should try to have this published. i know id buy it for sure. seriously! &i read the whole thing. this is actually my third or forth time reading it and it always makes my heart jump with so much emotion. i love how elaborate you are on all of the details in this. it def. put me right into the middle of this story. SERIOUSLY change salior names and GET THIS PUBLISHED!

It is brilliant the way conflict (battle) and denouement (act of love) occurred on the same site: the altar. How could one address one's issue if it is dormant unless it is unleashed? It is inevitable that the personalities as gods have to be awoken, even relived the moment or source of conflict. It was appropriate that the trauma was surfacing in their consciousness almost at the same time; it signals that the time of confrontation and resolution is at hand. The karma that intertwines them would soon be fulfilled. They were destined to meet despite Seiya's hand at play. It is also fitting that the solution for the deep hatred and vengeance subconsciously incubated for thousand of years is unconditional love.

Your fiction presented a powerful message of redemption through love. It is and will always be the best armament against any destructive force. You deserve applause for such noble message! With what and how the world has become, this message is timely and timeless.

Detailed critique in your yahoo email. From the same one who gave you a detailed review of Journey Through, assuming you have read it. Namaste!

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MuztA na..
It SeeMs Na You Are BusY NA^^x

I hAve One MOre SuggestIon!!
How if i saY.. CouLd You MAke
One More ChapTer On Thiz fic??^^x

That hArUka And Michiru Are getting mArried??
whAt Do YA tHiNK??

*wipes away a tear* That was touching...if Michiru's the mother then I'm ** off at Haruka for leaving Michiru with her child. What can I say but typical male... yup your fic made Haruka officially male. I truly wish there was more to the ending though, like Koinochi and Michiru moving in, Haruka & Michiru getting married, but most of all...I was woundering about the destiny of the two gods coming true. Because that would be interesting, and what ever happened to the other guy??It's been six years, has he been running the honeymoon thing?Is he dead? Did Haruka some how sleep walk and kill him? I hope you could make like a one shot or multiple chapter sequal to this story, the aftermath. Well hope to read more of your work in this part of fanfiction for years to come! R/R later humans!

it's over!! wa..i really love every bit of this fic..it's really awsome and twisted but in the end all the twist are being solved. i really like the plot and stuff! the only thing i never like is cliffy and yeah..i really taught taiki was one of the enemy..hehe..but that part is clear to me now..^^ well..it's kinda wierd but ulitimately it rocks! do more next time! it is really cool! oh if you dont mind, i'd like to add this one with my other collection of HarukaMichiru fics and print it, but if you do just email me ^^ thankx

That was a VERY good chapter...i love the way you ended...BRAVO! I hope to read more awesome stories from you down the road...

Ahh... much better. Now I won't have to hurt you with my virtual stick! :) I'm really just a sucker for happy endings, and look, you have provided me one! I am assuming that Michiru and Haruka get back together. Of course, you kind of leave that open ended, but... well, me with the happy endings, I'm gonna say they did and not even listen if you say they didn't. See me? Fingers in ears over here, off in happy Michiru/Haruka land... la la la. :P

Loved your story, hope to see more from you in the future. Well, ttfn!

RaLeCo

Yay! I absolutely love this ending...and I cannot thank you enough for sharing your (wonderful) imaginations with us…now…to answer some of your questions…
Actually I don’t have a favourite chapter at all…they are equally beautiful but If I had to pick out one of them, I would take chapter 22 because I like it so much. .the- ahem- love scene. …and then …the sadness in it especially when Michiru wakes up and finds herself alone in that cave. I also like the beginning of that story when Michiru kind of dislikes Haruka but at the same time feels attracted to her (who wouldn’t? She is just too wonderful…)
About the ending…honestly, I was not surprised about it because I thought that you would definitely mention the METS Project again since it was an important issue in the story itself…it was complete so it would be a waste if nobody makes use of it .hehehe….so a child is the result…one question.. how come that the child is a boy? I mean Haruka is a woman...Michiru is a woman , you know the chromosomes thing …so… it has to be a girl, right? Was it conceived during their lovemaking in the cave ? Has it something to do with the fact that Haruka is the reincarnation of a man ? Or with their powers as God and Goddess? Michiru wishes for it and they simply get it? Or a mixture of these theories? Ah…so many questions. What’s your vision? Anyway, boy or girl…gender doesn’t matter actually…I’m just glad hat they have a child at all…ahem…are you planning on writing more H&M fanfics? Yes? No? …Take a break…. you deserve it but please come back soon, okay? See you soon!

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Hey, How Are You?? I Liked The FinAL ChApTEr.. I DONt feel dissapOinT AbOUt ThaT! It was Nice and awesome Really..^ ^

But!! Im WondeRiNg... Who's The MoTher Of That Boy?? And Who's WIfe Would be For hArUka?? Is It MichIRu OR The OtHer wOMan?? Is HarUka StILL LOve MichiRu?? Is TheIr Loved was StiLL?? WeRe they Live each OtHEr as a familY or NOt?? eMAiL me IM NOt satIsFied.. Answer My questIons PLz GENESIS! of CouRse I enJoYed READING THE PROJECT!! Thats wHy Im So CoNceRned AbOut It.. AND ThoSe Are My QueStIons I wanTed You To AnSweR.. HERE's MyReal e-add... belldandy1514@
im waiting ^ ^ AND CONGRATULATION YOU DID IT VERY WELL!! THANKS YOUR STORY MADE ME FEEL GREAT!! I WISH YOU HAVE PLAN MORE TO WRITE ANOTHER STORY h&m.. SiNCe youVe Got A LoT of ReVieweRs.. ITZ NICE IF YOU DO ANOTER STORY ^ ^
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*starry eyed* KAWAII!! i LOVED this fic! it was O GOD ^o^!

ENCORE ENCORE! CLAPS MADLY...that was totally awesome dude! You are my hero! I knew everything would work out okay.

AN: YES! DO NOT LEAVE IT THERE!