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| Crow 2005-10-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseI don't even think the actual third season will be so good! This is amazing. It's funny, its depressing, it exciting, oh I just love it! I loved the fourth chapter, it rocked. And aye, Fear is getting some brains, and Kilobyte actually notes how anyone evil seems to be moronic and disloyal. Rick is brillant, grabbing characters onto his side with promises, a real politian. Random's new mind reading thing is kind of disturbing and the ability to control people, whoa, would want to see where that goes. Of all the fanfics I've read, this is surely the best. It was generally well done, especially good when in everyone's veiw first hand, so you can see how they all think. And Sparx' new battle with her emotions. She needs to get those under control yup. Its so great. I'm half tempted to request writing an episode myself! |
| Scarabbug 2005-03-21 ch 5, | abuseI'm loving this so far. The wasp sting was a nice touch. This is really well written. One hiunt for you, whenever you change locations in a story without changing a chapter, you show you've changed location by putting this * * * symbol between the scene change. See what I mean? Apart from that, this rocks. Keep it up. |
| ghost-of-no-one 2005-03-14 ch 1, | abuseOMG LOOK WHO HAS AN ACCOUNT! :D Um, lets hope this works! |
| Blue-Inked Frost 2005-02-02 ch 5, | abuseNice ep! I've already given you feedback on it, so I'll just say that I liked it, esp. the Rick bits, and leave it there. :) |
| CheleLiz 2005-02-02 ch 5, | abuseI have been ordered to read and review this set of stories, with threat of death, so here goes. I like the idea of a third series and I think all of you guys have done really well. All the ideas have been excellent and it almost seems as if all the episodes are coming from the one aurhor. I think the idea of Sparx with emotions is a relativly goodone and I like the way Kilobyte has been portrayed. Funnily enough, the episode with the most references to Random Virus and his struggles happenned to be the one by hyperpsychomaniac, surprise, surprise. It will be interesting to see how this story unfolds. |
| hyperpsychomaniac 2004-12-28 ch 3, | abuseThat was really, really interesting. I 'm glad you brought up the Random/Ace friendship issue, you pulled that off really well. And I also like how you had Ace nearly blasting Rick. You did Lady Illusion good too, she obviously has to stay evil and Kilobyte reprogramming her was a good way to do that. Good stuff. |
| Eclair - Homicidal Pastry 2004-12-09 ch 1, | abuseHehehe, it will be interesting seeing how Chuck deals with being a big brother, especially since he's used to being the only child. Sparks sounds pretty jealous of Lady Illusion, hm. |
| Lynxie 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuse*blinks* This is quite good, although if Jessica's such a big gamer she would see the point in upgrading all the charas in a game... even just as a precaution. I like the idea of chuck having to deal with getting a new sibling. hmm, I wonder how Sparx would see it... |
| Blue-Inked Frost 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseInappropriate I realise, but. What I liked: competent!Fear, some brilliant lines esp. the owing thing, Chuck-as-potential-big-brother (v.v. nice human subplot), D.R.F.N. What I didn't like: Nothing, I'd've told you before. One query: why the R rating? Nothing in this chapter that isn't PG-13. |