Aww, that was sweet. I'm glad that despite it being a memorable moment between them that Alan can still keep up his usual tricks and comments. You certainly kept him in character!! :D

I like it. TinTin's POV is v. interesting. Yay!

This is one of the best romantic stories I have ever read.It is pla and written fabulously! I love how Tin-Tin did the narration and described everything.Very cute keep writing.I look forward to reading more of your work

Wow really cute stroy, it was great.

I had to wait until fanfic got it's act back together before I wrote this simple review. I like this Alan a lot better than Wild Child.Good job!Now get back to work on Tales! Just joking. Becky

I haev been dying to review this story for days it is brilliant and completed the wee cracks before tails and other stories. Keep writing and hurry up wiht tails.

These characters have so much life thanks to your creative ways. This is a lovely, sweet beginning for what is yet to come regarding Alan and Tin-Tin as they evolve in your other stories. Thank you for such a pleasant read!

MCJ your writing only gets better with time. This is a lovely synopsis of what Alan and Tin Tin were going throught the early years. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the rest of Tales.

So simple. So sweet. So well-written. You have such a wonderful way of weaving words. Thanks for sharing.