Well I think it's a good and interesting story, I will admit I thought it an odd place to end it. I dunno, I fell it needs something else. I know it's a challenge, and I thought you did the challenge very well indeed. but maybe you could do some more chapters, simply because this needs something else. Even if you just have an A/N at the top of the next chapter explaining that the new chapter isn't part of the challenge. But a very very good ficlet there! An interesting concept of the story and changes in both dialogue and characters actions. Well done!

Nela

OMG! CONTINUE DON'T LET THIS STORY DIE!

great story but i am guessing the challenge is ova now.

This is very good I have enjoyed it so far please keep going also
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The pebble

so is that the whole story?

I would love to see you continue this story from this point on. How would Boromir's being alive change things? WOULD it change things?? This fic makes a great starting point. :-)

What the hell?

Wow, I love these kin dof what if things, keep it up

A true catholic never rejects the teachings of the church.

Interesting, very interesting. Hope you update this soon.

Looking good! Just thought I'd warn you that you've got a mini-Balrog in your summary.
B2WM

Any particular reason this is a one-shot? Could you continue the story? I love it when Boromir lives! How would the story change with Boromir alive?

Very interesting and well written..I am interested in the challenege site, if you could email me details that would be great.