  Gwynhafra 2007-02-28 . chapter 5Yay! More Tezuka Echizen supporters. ^^
I'm glad they got back together in the end. |
| ennov 2005-09-06 . chapter 4 Ah u made tezuka cried... but this is a nice fic so pls continue... |
| Pewe 2005-03-27 . chapter 4 Craze! Finally! At last! Eventually I had a chance to read some Tezuryo fics! (Why am I so slow when it comes about reading ya?) Sorry that I have just read your story now and not from the first time you posted it!
Oya, here’s my review… Like the idea of presenting a third person problem in Tezuka and Ryoma’s relationship. Just make sure you won’t end their relationship in the end of this story ya! Oya… please add some more Tezuryo action here! ^^ hehehe… Gambatte!! |
| Eien no Kaze 2005-03-19 . chapter 4 Izumi disappear 6 years ago and she was Ryoma's foster sister?? did you get the idea from the movie? Coz in the movie there's a character who is Ryoma's foster brother and he dissappear when Ryoma was young |
| princessugar 2005-03-04 . chapter 4 omg...poor kuni-chan..!! ryo-kun is evil!! :D update soon...i held your promise TezuRyo in the end! (^o^) |
| kekame 2005-02-10 . chapter 4 Oh! It got angsty! yay!
Thank you for being encouraging and always reading my stuff, too! ^_~ |
| BAKAS 2005-01-29 . chapter 4 Hoi Hoi! Annie here! Thanks for submitting a review for our story! I LOVE this fic so far. Too bad the next one is going to be the last chapter. I love the plot and what not. Keep up the great work! Ja! xoxo |
| sgss 2005-01-16 . chapter 4 poor Tezuka! I hope ya update soon.. this chapter was very enjoyable... o look! a duckie! (runs off) |
| Shells 2005-01-16 . chapter 4 o!! haha what would ryoma's reaction be when he learns the truth!! haha... the sequel... newbie, manager, bestfriend...maybe... izumi enters seigakuu tennis club, and be their manager... bestfriend...of ryoma? hm...>< haha i can't wait for the next chp:D |
| RuByMoOn17 2005-01-15 . chapter 4 oh no! will TezuRyo still be 2gether??! |
| Saniwa 2005-01-15 . chapter 3 Oh, forgot to tell you. I'm breaking down Mystery: Aftermath into two since it has reached 30 pages long with only 80 percent of it completed. PLease be patient ne. Huff... |
| Saniwa 2005-01-15 . chapter 4 May: YAY, update!
Ryoma: Yes, unlike you 'whacks May on the head'
May: Itai! YOu brat!
Tezuka: Do you have any problem with my girl... boyfriend?
May: Iie... 'scared'
Ryoma: stuck out his tongue
May: I'll get you later, GAKI!
Love it! The conflict is getting worse. And Tezuka was extremely jealous, losing control, and CRYING! OMG. He'd do all that for Ryoma only ne. Hehehe...
Just a few grammar errors (I know I don't have any right in this since mine is worse) But I want to make your fic better ne. One thing for sure, please don't separate Ryoma with Tezuka. Pretty please! Can't wait for the last chapter. More YAOINESS please... you know between who and who ^_~ |
| Ochibi 2004-12-26 . chapter 3 Nice story...Update soon |
| kekame 2004-12-22 . chapter 3 omoshiroi! the tezukaxechizen pairing seems to make enough sense. ^_^
this is a really interesting idea for a story, too. very creative. keep writing! and arigatou gozaimasu for reading mine! ^_~ |
| Shells 2004-12-12 . chapter 3 o! i luv this plot! haha... ryoma's first love i'm wondering? aw... hm confessing is so >< haha but i'm surprised that izumi can run away at 11 and manage on her own... i can't wait for the next chp! haha ya, what right DOES tomoko have to question who goes to see ryoma? :D |
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