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| k 2005-04-16 ch 3, anon. | abusejust a quick note to say that 'spelt' is an actual word and that 'spelled' is not. |
| brenda-wood 2004-12-07 ch 11,  | abuseoverall I liked this fic I feel like a lot is missing between the last chap and the epilogue You needed a chap in between to show syd dealing with her parents and denosivich and coming inot a couple of small scrapes - worryong her firneds and family so if you want to add a "missing chap" that is all that needs doing brenda |
| Pyrena 2004-12-06 ch 11, | abuseWOW! are you gonna make a sequel? Please I would like to know if she takes down the KGB and ends up with Jeffrey. |
| 47 is life 2004-12-06 ch 10, anon. | abusethis is the 48th reveiw that means u were at 47 good 4 u! an alias milestone yay 47 yay 4 this story |
| brenda-wood 2004-12-06 ch 10, | abuseOh good jack is in the mix keep me posted OK |
| Agent Flamingo 2004-12-06 ch 10, | abuseJust found this! I cant believe there is only one more chapter left! What is going to happen between Jack and Sydney? Will Sydney ever see her mother in the same way again?? Hope the next chapter is nice and long... please update soon Kate |
| Eyghon fr 2004-12-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseFor a second here I panicked and thought that was it, the end, with Jack telling her she has a choice and her saying "ok, I want out". what a nightmare ! I loved it, please hurry with more ! |
| Pyrena 2004-12-05 ch 10, | abusewow! Poor Jack seeing his daughter for the first time in 10 years and she leaves,but I understand her decision. Great chapter!! keep up the good work. |
| jack bristow 2004-12-05 ch 9, anon. | abusehow dare someone give jack bristow marching orders! i always like 2 think that irina is the best terrorist and jack is the best cia agent hopefully we will get 2 see everyone acknoledge how amazing spydaddy is... see them all cower in fear and have him kick major as... great story update soon! |
| thedorkygirl 2004-12-05 ch 9, | abuseDude, I'm really enjoying this fic. I like that the "Green-eyed Suit" isn't sixteen, seventeen, whatever, but an actual age where he is of USE to the plotline. |
| mrs. michael vartan 2004-12-04 ch 9, anon. | abuselol i thought it was vaughn but i was just making sure... i thought it mite have been his dad or something and irina jsut hadn't killed him yet... but its okay its fiction which means that he can be and agent no matter what... anyway GREAT CHAPTER gotta love spydaddy anyway update soon! |
| Pyrena 2004-12-04 ch 9, | abuseChoices, Choices!! What is Jack going to do?? |
| Eyghon 2004-12-04 ch 9, anon. | abuseExcellent ! Keep posting, that's great ! |
| Pyrena 2004-12-03 ch 7, | abuseI didn't mean that sark commit bad or anything just that, well vaughn alot older than syd. I can't wait to see how you play this out |
| Pyrena 2004-12-03 ch 8, | abuseGreat chapter keep up the good work!! I am glad you brought in Vaughne. Wait the could Denosivich be like a good sark?? oh forget I said that |