Lovely story. I like it very very much. My rating is 20 and that means that your story goes to my Favorites.

Awesome.I like the end,and the little bit of the story ahead by about 4 that says he was more confused than tails at a redneck convention.HHAHAHA!

how cute!

Nice story but i give it 15/20 ^^

Aw that was the best! Good job! I'm so adding this to my favorites!

i really like this story i think this is the forth time ive read it i missed reading it so i read it again today i like knux and rouge stories im guess what you would call a hopless romantic because ive read evry single knux rouge story on this site but any way thanks for the story and i hope to see you write another good one

I read this whole story, Ill admit, it was better than **.

go you!

But your plot sucked.

I hear you are one of Summer's greatest companions. I loath that **, She thinks she is so great because the world loves to review.

I also hear your a Shadow Stalkr supporter. You shouldn't be. You may not be good but your better than Stalkr and Summer.

good day,

Serenity Falls

You are so awsome! I give it a 207,001/20!

^_^ CUTENESS

Summer: I happy ending to a beautiful story! I really love this one, Im going to link it directly in my profile! It so deserves it!

Kal0: *crying* it- is so beautiful!

Summer: You okay Kal0?

Kal0: *crying hysterically* THey R gonna be together forever! OMG OMG OMG!

Summer: whoa calm down Kal0... anyway I loved the balconey idea. Recreating there most sentimental moment. Great job! definately in my top 10... and maybe my top 3... or maybe one 1! YOur awsum I am honored to be your friend.

Kal0: So... SO beautiful!

Summer: I give you a 20

Kal0: and i give you a Q!

Summer: Uh... I think thats good, but I don't know. I also liked the part when Sonic was like "One step at a time, Amy" That was so funny!

Love Yur fan gurls... hehe

Kal0 the fox
and
Summer Katosh

Awweh.

A rating system... Not the best idea you could figure out. Tremendous impact on that ego, you know.

A cute ending, very cute. You have warned the readers about characterization issues, and I'm sure you lose points for that, but it's the thought that counts. This time, at least.

One part in particular irked me: Rouge's letter. She repeats the phrase "years ago", which is terrible. It does transfer a rather lost and embarrassed character's person well, but you could have made a different phrase there.

Plus, you're going to have quite a pain with what I'm going to tell you now. It appears that putting thoughts in the form of italics or single quotation marks is an error. You have to incorporate every thought into description. That means reported speech, switching tenses back by one and a whole bundle of annoying but small adjustments. If this story is complete and out of topic, do bear the point in mind when writing future works.

Additionally, you haven't taken the capitalization/punctuation issues in dialogue into consideration.

Kind of rushed and description is still not on the level, but, I guess, the plotting makes up for that.

Now, I come face-to-face with a very hard decision. Your score. If I were to rate a good story by twelve, this one would settle for a fifteen. Way ahead of the disaster level, but, as you have admitted, there are flaws that you've bypassed the removal of.

What is there to add? Keep writing and you will own the score we all love and adore - perfect.

Have a nice, abuse-free day.

Aw...Now that's the way to end a story.

Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! I got an e-mail saying you updating and I became very happy. I loved your story! For the rating, you get a 21/20! I LOVED IT! Sorry... if that seemed weird... BUT I LOVED IT!

This is a good piece of writing. It really is. There are however, a few things I noticed that need a small bit of change. 1st: Because I'm a crazy person, I felt the need to point out the fact that while the rooms of Knuckles and Rouge are 62, the cashier miraculously says "sixty-four." Just a small detail i noticed. 2nd, Where was Sonic? He seems to have dissapeared off the face of the earth. Also, on the subject of characters, Where is Amy? Maybe in the next Chap.? She also seems to have dissapeared. My 3rd and final, though small, critique is the fact that while yes Knuckles getting hurt was sad, I felt that it ended in too short a span. If it was intended to be a sad part, I would have expected to be just a bit longer. In My Honest Opinion. As a last word of congratz, nice job. This is definatley one of the better pieces of writing I have seen. Nicley done and Bravo. Can't wait for the final chapter.