 tsuki-kage Uchida 2009-12-07 . chapter 1Love it so much! |
 Phoniex32 2009-10-18 . chapter 9 Please post the epilouge and very good job on the story. Gets your attention on the first sentence. |
 reflecting 2009-10-05 . chapter 9oh this story was just lovely. I remember reading it a long time ago, just the first two chapters. found it again today and have been reading non-stop. now I find myself craving that lovely epilogue you mentioned, if only to make it last a little more :)
anyway, like I said, a very good story. loved how well you make it work; being fairytale based off of Cinderella yet so very very original and in-character. yup, I adored it. |
 NiminariAmriath 2009-07-12 . chapter 9i like it, looking forward to the epilogue |
 Brukaoru 2009-05-02 . chapter 9This was a great story! Loved the plot, well written, very few spelling/grammar mistakes.
Excellent work! :D |
 J Luc Pitard 2009-04-29 . chapter 9Wonderful AU. I appreciated the detail you added to your world, with the history and social background. Kaoru as a passive/aggressive servant is hysterical! At least her cooking skills fit perfectly. Nicely done. |
 sapphireracoongal 2009-04-20 . chapter 9I just love the entire story!! The plot, the twist and the romance!! Love all of them!! It is an awesome story!! I really hope you can post the epilogue somewhere so that I can read it!! I would appreciate it very much!! Thank you for this wonderful story!! |
 Hidari 2009-04-14 . chapter 5Okay, constructive criticism. A good proofreader would do you a bit of good correcting typos and minor spelling errors. Sometimes you get the saying wrong. For example, it should be 'wasn't' instead of 'was' -- "On Sundays it was worth your life to be underfoot."
Otherwise, very creative story. |
 Hidari 2009-04-14 . chapter 4Ahahhaha! Very very good. "An onmitsu’s pride and joy was his ability to tell a straight-faced lie." This is so creative. Luv it. |
 Hidari 2009-04-14 . chapter 3"Still, one way or another the girl would be found and stuffed into a wedding kimono." Lol! That line is so precious! I'm not used to seeing 'Kenshin, man of the world' but the Oniwabanshu plotting to marry him off sounds just so darn funny! I'm liking this more and more. ^^ |
 First Lady Jane 2009-03-15 . chapter 9you wouldn't believe how many times i've read this story. i've been rereading it for YEARS. it's one of my favorite fics ever. i would really love to be able to read the epilogue so please? link me to it or something? i would really appreciate it. thank you for this beautiful story. it has carried me through many a ficless night. :) |
 twin silver moons 2009-01-21 . chapter 9 put the damn lemon oh yeah and the story is awesome |
 staggered incite 2008-11-01 . chapter 9ah. so very satisfying. thanks very much for the lovely, satisfying, wonderful read. |
 staggered incite 2008-11-01 . chapter 1i love fairy tales. this one was well crafted. the set up, divine. thanks for the read. |
 xXoro-chanXx 2008-09-14 . chapter 9can u send me the epilogue for this i really want to read it! ! |