Love it so much!

Please post the epilouge and very good job on the story. Gets your attention on the first sentence.

oh this story was just lovely. I remember reading it a long time ago, just the first two chapters. found it again today and have been reading non-stop. now I find myself craving that lovely epilogue you mentioned, if only to make it last a little more :)

anyway, like I said, a very good story. loved how well you make it work; being fairytale based off of Cinderella yet so very very original and in-character. yup, I adored it.

i like it, looking forward to the epilogue

This was a great story! Loved the plot, well written, very few spelling/grammar mistakes.

Excellent work! :D

Wonderful AU. I appreciated the detail you added to your world, with the history and social background. Kaoru as a passive/aggressive servant is hysterical! At least her cooking skills fit perfectly. Nicely done.

I just love the entire story!! The plot, the twist and the romance!! Love all of them!! It is an awesome story!! I really hope you can post the epilogue somewhere so that I can read it!! I would appreciate it very much!! Thank you for this wonderful story!!

Okay, constructive criticism. A good proofreader would do you a bit of good correcting typos and minor spelling errors. Sometimes you get the saying wrong. For example, it should be 'wasn't' instead of 'was' -- "On Sundays it was worth your life to be underfoot."

Otherwise, very creative story.

Ahahhaha! Very very good. "An onmitsu’s pride and joy was his ability to tell a straight-faced lie." This is so creative. Luv it.

"Still, one way or another the girl would be found and stuffed into a wedding kimono." Lol! That line is so precious! I'm not used to seeing 'Kenshin, man of the world' but the Oniwabanshu plotting to marry him off sounds just so darn funny! I'm liking this more and more. ^^

you wouldn't believe how many times i've read this story. i've been rereading it for YEARS. it's one of my favorite fics ever. i would really love to be able to read the epilogue so please? link me to it or something? i would really appreciate it. thank you for this beautiful story. it has carried me through many a ficless night. :)

put the damn lemon oh yeah and the story is awesome

ah. so very satisfying. thanks very much for the lovely, satisfying, wonderful read.

i love fairy tales. this one was well crafted. the set up, divine. thanks for the read.

can u send me the epilogue for this i really want to read it! !