This was a fun idea, I like your version of Edna's meeting with these two. Her later reaction and Buddy's attitude was funny; 'but his eyes were of that of a child begging to keep an abandoned puppy he found.' lol! I can just see that :D

Ah, so Edna had some foresight... Cool. Nice job. I heart this movie.

Interesting idea.

Just one thing- when describing an action, PLEASE do not use netspeak (ie: "(snickers quietly)"), it completely breaks the flow of the story. Go ahead and describe what the character's doing, don't abbreviate it with action text.

Otherwise, nicely done.

Nice to see another Edna-ficcer out there. :}

Very interesting. You pretty much captured Edna's character, as well as Mirage and Syndrome. Very nice.

This may be a bit off the subject, but I got your review for one of my stories, and I think it would be wonderful if you could illustrate for that story. All I need is the link to view it once it is finished and posted. I can't wait to see it!

cool! A look into the thoughts of Edna Mode, before and during the end of the movie. And what a good thing that "the cape did what I thought it would do"! ; ) anyway, nice job!

Good story!It was incredibly funny to see Syndrome act like a child and Mirage acting like a mother.

I don't think Edna should have designed Syndrome's

suit.She works only with super heroes,the good guys.Maybe someone else did.

Like in a Incredibles fanfic that I wrote on paper,

one of the character is a fashion designer who is

creating super suits(like Edna)but for super vilains(she is an evil women)and is also Edna's

rival(and archnemissis)I made like she is the one

Who designed Syndrome'suit.

I love this story!Keep on the good work!

I love it! EDNA MODE IS THE BEST!

Dear MidnightMoon:

I thought the whole point of the ending was that Syndrome *hadn't* had his costume designed by Edna. That was the poetic justice of the thing: Syndrome hates all superheroes; therefore, he doesn't trust anyone who sympathizes with them; therefore, he would never, ever fraternize with Edna Mode; therefore, he doesn't know about the perils of wearing a cape; therefore... well, you know.

Sicnerely,

Qoheleth

That was SUPER! what a sweet, sweet one-shot man ;)

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Oh Wow. Edna purposely gave Snydrome a cape

i hate flamers!

dont listen to that last review, you have a very good story, i admit there are a few problems but i liked it alot

This THING is full of horrible mistakes. Firstly because Edna wouldn't help Syndrome like that, without even knowing him. She likes Supers, but not just ANY Super. Then there's the whole "Mirage kicks 'Buddy's ass"... that's not even a possibility. I think you were half asleep when you watched it, because it's a little obvious the way Mirage acts around Syndrome: she does what he tells her to.

Also, Edna wouldn't put a cape just because "his eyes were like a puppy's"! No! She's not that kind of woman. You can see that when she's talking to Bob. She always thinks she's right, and if she doesn't want to do something, she won't, no matter how much begging there is.

And yes, Edna knew Supers had died because of capes. She told Helen so.

Everyone is OOC and the plot pretty much sucks, because it makes no sense.

Try to come up with something decent. Bye.

few errors... but an awesome one-shot. you captured edna's character perfectly!

Hey, good one-shot.

I greatly enjoyed, I suggest continue along the line of this story, I believe you showed very good characterization with Edna Mode.

-Tashikawa

I LOVE this! It's really great! I like the way you potrayed Syndrome. He's kind of like an innocent little child; much more likable! It was an awesome fic! Check out my website sometime for more info on 'The Incredibles'. Until then, keep up the good work!

C. D. Anders ;D