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| bluecatcinema 2008-06-02 ch 5,  | abuseThis is getting good! I hope you put the next chapter up soon! |
| Alana-StarSugarCat 2007-01-10 ch 5, | abuseAlana: aw cute Evo: meh |
| Zeuswriters 2006-12-12 ch 4, | abuseWrite More! |
| Spiritual Magic 2005-10-19 ch 2, | abuseOn second thought...does a beaver even CARE if it's fat? |
| Spiritual Magic 2005-10-13 ch 1, | abuse"A body that most female beavers would absolutely love to have?" LMAO! Don't all beavers look the same? |
| jennie 2005-08-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseaw! that was cute! im happy for dag! ^_^ |
| fish person 2005-01-13 ch 2, | abuseThe stories okay still, but I still think that there should at least be a little bit of drama n it. Like some kind of problem with the relationship or something, and maybe get the next chapter up sooner. |
| fish person 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abuseYeah, it was okay, good prelude thingy type...thingy and such. I liked the part where Dagget was sad, it makes me feel that he's not wind up artificial beaver thingy after all. (Every cartoon needs to feel more emotions than the typical cartooney ones, it makes them more real, and gets more interest sometimes from readers if they can see that something is not all fun and games, but that's probably just my opinion) Anyway, good story. You should continue it... |