This is getting good! I hope you put the next chapter up soon!

Alana: aw cute

Evo: meh

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On second thought...does a beaver even CARE if it's fat?

"A body that most female beavers would absolutely love to have?" LMAO! Don't all beavers look the same?

aw! that was cute! im happy for dag! ^_^

The stories okay still, but I still think that there should at least be a little bit of drama n it. Like some kind of problem with the relationship or something, and maybe get the next chapter up sooner.

Yeah, it was okay, good prelude thingy type...thingy and such. I liked the part where Dagget was sad, it makes me feel that he's not wind up artificial beaver thingy after all. (Every cartoon needs to feel more emotions than the typical cartooney ones, it makes them more real, and gets more interest sometimes from readers if they can see that something is not all fun and games, but that's probably just my opinion) Anyway, good story. You should continue it...