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| Reina Antilles 2007-12-05 ch 1,  | abuseAw, very sweet and well-written. My favorite Trek couple, TnT. ~Reina |
| anon1 2007-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww. beautiful story. |
| Phaser Lady 2005-08-31 ch 1, | abuseI've read this one before, and I'll probably read it again. Excellent job. A pleasure to read as always. |
| Agent Alexandra Paris 2004-12-29 ch 1, | abuseThis story could not describe T'Pol and Trip better! I hope you will write more. |
| JadziaKathryn 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseOkay, this is well written, but Vulcans are the ultimate "semper fidelis" race. So it's good, but doesn't really work. The last line is good though. |
| Kath 2004-11-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought this was very well done! I like how you explained her idea of the marriage and what was expected of her as well as their emotions towards one another. Great job!! |
| coldqueen 2004-11-24 ch 1, | abuseOne problem with this. Vulcans see adultry as the ultimate bad. ANy person to commit adultry is shunned and exiled from Vulcan. T'Pol would never do this for fear of retribution to her family and herself. But if you ignore that little fact, then this is a great story. |
| Cherilynn64 2004-11-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was just awesome. I've been trying to leave you feedback for like 2 days, but has been down. I was like, "Don't worry, I know a bunch of people have read this, but we can't tell you!" Glad the site is up again. I think I'm going to have to start a campaign to raise money to send all your scripts to Manny Coto and bribe someone to get you an interview with him as a staff writer. ;-) |
| JennaTripped 2004-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well done. I was one of the ones hoping someone would have the guts to write an adultery fic, and I'm glad you did! I'm under the impression that her marriage won't be an obstacle for long, so this probably won't become necessary, but it's a good what if. I find it realistic that they would both struggle with this, and despite Trip's beliefs there is every possibility that under the right circumstances they would succumb to temptation. This was respectful and very well-written. |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-27 ch 1, | abuseNice gesture T'Pol made for Trip at the end. You really have these two down pat! |