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| loser in the gutter 2007-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseaw. very cute. luv the ending. |
| makenzi 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseed in denial ... is absolutely marvelous and im loving this story awesome job with it! |
| Angevar 2006-12-01 ch 1, | abusem... haven't read this one before. But seeing as how I only recently took the plunge and entered the fandom... congrats! This is my first FMA fic. And, from having watched a little more than half the series, I think you did a pretty good job. Ah... sweet denial. *giggles* I think I might be ever-so-slightly in love with your writing style in general or it may be that I adore the way you wrote Edo. In any case, I'm quite the happy fangirl over here now. I'll just be tottering off to peruse the rest of your collection, ja. |
| Mistress of Darkness 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseHehe, that was good... very nice... it's actually the first RoyXEd thing I've read, so kudos to you for keeping me interested ^_^. |
| em-witchwood 2006-09-11 ch 1, | abuseEdward in denial has got to be one of the funniest things on the planet. Loved it. |
| naive-wanderer 2006-07-28 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love this! Denial!Ed is so very amusing. xD I really loved the first few paragraphs about admitting certain things (ehehe), and the description of Ed's utter hatred of alarm clocks was *wonderful*. Nothing was OOC; in fact, Ed was just so marvelously *in-character*, which unfortunately doesn't happen too often in this fandom (at least from what I've read)! Great writing skills you've got there! :P Overall just a great, fun read. (And Timeline? Psh... Nobody needs to follow the *timeline* in FMA fics! That takes all the fun out of it! :P ) I'll keep an eye on your writing now! :D ~Chrystaline |
| Lokelani 2006-07-24 ch 1, | abuseoh denial! totally an ed thing. I thought this was adorable :) |
| ChuckleDoodleDoo 2006-05-01 ch 1, | abuseSo very adorable and totally in character. I liked it. ^^ |
| Phantom of Spades 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet! |
| Trouble the Cat 2005-11-29 ch 1, | abuseWho does Ed think he's kidding? XD I laughed my ** off at the part about Roy's alarm clock. I like it. keep up the good work. |
| K. A. Maples 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseA very cute Roy/Ed, I must say. *ponders just how the hair tye got up there, anyway* |
| Ashkelives 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseThank you so much! You totally made me a complete RoyxEd fanatic with this story when I read it about a week ago, and now I just cannot stop writing fanfics about the two of them! *bows to you* Your writing is great! Your characters are perfect! *envies you* I wish I could write this good! Thank you for giving me a new favorite couple to dote upon! ^.~ |
| rachel115 2005-06-19 ch 1, | abusetoo cute for words. Very well written. All in all, nice. Thanks! |
| rixiel 2005-06-15 ch 1, | abuseLOL, this is cute! I like how you put the whole denial and paranoia in Ed :D |
| safire flame 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusethat ending was just adorable...seriously! write more! |