*happy sigh* That was utterly adorkable . . . ^.^

Iriko-chan

De-Nile ain't only a river in Egypt. I LOVE that lil blurb! and it so fits.

aw. very cute. luv the ending.

ed in denial ... is absolutely marvelous
and im loving this story
awesome job with it!

m... haven't read this one before. But seeing as how I only recently took the plunge and entered the fandom... congrats! This is my first FMA fic. And, from having watched a little more than half the series, I think you did a pretty good job.

Ah... sweet denial. *giggles* I think I might be ever-so-slightly in love with your writing style in general or it may be that I adore the way you wrote Edo. In any case, I'm quite the happy fangirl over here now. I'll just be tottering off to peruse the rest of your collection, ja.

Hehe, that was good... very nice... it's actually the first RoyXEd thing I've read, so kudos to you for keeping me interested ^_^.

Edward in denial has got to be one of the funniest things on the planet. Loved it.

Oh, I love this! Denial!Ed is so very amusing. xD I really loved the first few paragraphs about admitting certain things (ehehe), and the description of Ed's utter hatred of alarm clocks was *wonderful*. Nothing was OOC; in fact, Ed was just so marvelously *in-character*, which unfortunately doesn't happen too often in this fandom (at least from what I've read)! Great writing skills you've got there! :P Overall just a great, fun read.

(And Timeline? Psh... Nobody needs to follow the *timeline* in FMA fics! That takes all the fun out of it! :P )

I'll keep an eye on your writing now! :D
~Chrystaline

oh denial! totally an ed thing.

I thought this was adorable :)

So very adorable and totally in character. I liked it. ^^

How sweet!

Who does Ed think he's kidding? XD I laughed my ass off at the part about Roy's alarm clock.

I like it. keep up the good work.

A very cute Roy/Ed, I must say. *ponders just how the hair tye got up there, anyway*

Thank you so much! You totally made me a complete RoyxEd fanatic with this story when I read it about a week ago, and now I just cannot stop writing fanfics about the two of them! *bows to you* Your writing is great! Your characters are perfect! *envies you* I wish I could write this good! Thank you for giving me a new favorite couple to dote upon! ^.~

too cute for words. Very well written. All in all, nice. Thanks!