Are you thinking of continuing this at all? It could be interesting, especially if Willow decides to go ahead and do the mojo or whatever. It's an interesting start, and I like your characterisations. Their voices seemed to sound in my head when I read the lines, which is definitely a plus. But...Kennedy? I'm not really a fan, but that's just a personal preference.

She wants to bring back Xander's eye? It's cute.

It would be interesting to read a sequel to that... will she do it or not? If so, will Xander be happy? That sorta thing...

The start is very promising! As for now, this fics seems to offer a lot of twists. Keep it up!

I see the badness! Kennedy! did she even thank him for saving her life?