You're excellent psychology strikes again! You did a good job examining Tommy's and Billy's relationship, the fault lines in it, and why Billy made the choices that he did. I especially liked how you dealt with Billy's seemingly self-imposed exile in Zeo, and you did so without making the other Rangers look like insensitive jerks. A lot of authors fall into the trap of blaming the Zeos for abandoning Billy after he lost his powers and in the process making a mockery of "once a Ranger, always a Ranger". You successfully make the case that much of it was Billy's own fault and choices.

Historian

GOOD!

hey! i like it!

I really enjoyed this. I especially liked the subplot between Tommy and Billy.

I have to say you are a wonderful writer. I love your stories, and I find the adventures immensely amusing and creative. I also love the entire Park family- not only is Adam one of my all time favorites, but now Trevor, Eileen, and Franklin have also all been added to that list!