Hey, I like your story and it's been months since I wait for the continuation. when will you update it. I want like others readers know what will happen to SG1 and to the dynamic of the tem. Please a continuation!

I like your story and It's been a while since I wait for a continuation. Please updates. Thanks!

could you update your story:it's been a while that I wait for a continuation because your story is very interesting. Please update!

wonderful,as per usual. I like how the voices blend into each other, and suit the specific person while tying the whole story together. I look forewards to the next installment!

I've been told about haggis so many times. It's digusting. My mom thinks its fun to threaten me and my siblings with it. Ugh.*nearly barfs* I hate the sound f Haggis. I hope will never have to try it. I'd rather die. My mom had to eat when she was a kid because her mom was Scottish. Weird Scottish people and Haggis.

Please continue, now that you've started don't wait or we might be stuck here forever.

I love the way Teal'c has taken to sailing and always includes technical details in his journal entries!

That was a good chapter, even if not lighthearted. Your Captain doesn't seem Mary-Sueish at all, but a good OC. I can see how a mission like that would rattle Jack. Keep writing, this is a fantastic story so far!

I too was howling with laughter at Teal'c's interpretation of the egg ritual, and Jack's description of the people as weird and British. I'd bet that Hammond pulled a few strings to make sure the team stayed together, because he knows they were together in 1969 but that they haven't been there yet. I like your mix of humor and introspection.

Yay for Sam feeling better and hugging & making up with Daniel. They're going to kick butt in the egg-drop competition. Also good to see Jack dealing with some of the more serious issues.

"within the Jaffa we know some strange half-British, sea-dwelling, Connolly-loving creature was just waiting to come out. (eww, icky mental image" - hahaha. That's great - I love your portrayal of Teal'c. I got a kick out of Sam & Jack puking and laughing about the team bonding experience.

Teal'c's journal says Daniel didn't answer his question, but Jack's journal said Daniel was graphic enough that people threw up. What gives? Poor Sam - not only sick (I wonder if the Naquada effects that at all) but now slave labor. This was another great chapter - very funny, great characterization.

You might want to specify that they're in Norfolk, England, as opposed to Norfolk, Virginia (USA), because either would make sense as a starting point to a transatlantic crossing (I could tell you meant England because I lived near the stateside Norfolk and could use process of elimination based on context, but other readers might not). This is really funny while everyone is still in character. I especially liked Daniel's somewhat snarky journal entries (I hope they have a brig), Teal'c's enthusiasm, Sam betting with Teal'c, and Jack's ranting. Poor Sam - I've felt slightly sick on ships, but my brother gets bad seasickness, so I know it's no picnic. Your Captain is an interesting character. I really like the team interaction so far, I think it was a good choice to have it take place in an earlier season.

gald to see you're back! keep updating, please! =)

Love Teal'c's pov on the egg-drop contest.

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