 Paranormal Medicine 1/5/07 . chapter 1Wow! this is amazing, i realy like the idea of these three being kind of frineds and i'm glad you had them making jokes about the stereotypes for the houses and themselves plus I'm always up for some Harry-exclusion. The part about Cedric and flying was so sad!I didn't think Cho and Cedric were jerks, they were speaking the truth and it was a great characterisation for them! Anywho, this was was just wonderful, thank you for writing it. |
 Scarlet Priestess 1/5/04 . chapter 1Wow. I REALLY liked this. As much as I love Harry...well...I'm finding it harder to admire him as much as I did before. You captured Malfoy perfectly, and I loved your Cho and Cedric. You portrayed Cho as having a personality, not just as a slut. Very interesting; now I'm going to go read your other fics. |
 monkeymouse 4/6/03 . chapter 1Okay, I won't say your fic was a bit OOC, but even you don't seem to believe that Ced & Cho were already involved by the end of the Lupin year; you don't show it here. Friendly banter and respect, but I see no real affection in your fic between them. And I doubt Draco would hang with Ced if he knew Ced was a half-and-half; to say nothing of hanging with players from other Houses ("consorting with the enemy"). And Cho & Ced are surprisingly blase about Draco uttering the AK even in jest; ditto saying Voldie's name. Are all three of them Death Eaters?
Besides, Gryffindor wouldn't have kicked off a "really good" Seeker (of any gender) to make room for a First Year. How good could she have been, with Slytherin in a six-year streak when HP shows up?
This is a well-written piece apart from a few Americanisms that hit the ear wrong, but its hidden realities take some getting used to. |
 Flightless Angel1 10/9/02 . chapter 1The first, second and third time i read this story, i thought that it was awesome. Hey, no sucking up or lying intended, it is honestly one of the best short stories that I've read. |
 cho chang lover 4/11/02 . chapter 1 this is so good...i love how they all talk...and c/c forver! whoo hoo! and draco was
cool! like iago in shakesper...so...how did you get this great idea! its
wonderful! more more more more mroe! |
 Tho 2/10/02 . chapter 1 OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSHHHHHHHHHH!
Thank YOU sooooooo much! For making a Fan Fic. With Cedric still alive (with Cho).
lol Draco's fuuuuuuny!
I'm on medicaion.
Crap! G2g |
 account gone 1/21/02 . chapter 1For once, oh great Pikacheeka, I am totally speechless. :)
What a great piece of literary work! I've also seen this fic on other sites, and it's been well-received there :)
Anyways, i LOVED it |
 Mountainside Kilts 12/19/01 . chapter 1Amazing work. It's interesting to see how other houses see things - and see them alike. |
 mickey 11/14/01 . chapter 1 Bravo- you told the truth, although few enjoy hearing it, about the prejudice between the houses and how the other seekers feel about their competitor- all and all a great story. |
 Goggled Monkey 9/22/01 . chapter 1I loved this. Its nice to see more stories about Cho and Draco with out makeing them evil. Or maybe it did? At least them with personalities. Great fic. |
 ChoHO 9/17/01 . chapter 1Beautiful |
 ObviouslyDesperate 9/10/01 . chapter 1That was good writing. I usually don't like angsty stuff, but that was good! |
 SleepyAngel 9/2/01 . chapter 1wowo...truly disturbing how much ppl hate harry behind his back (cept for draco) and ill have to go thru it to catch all the "double meanings". anyway, great job. shows that draco's not such a snot after all...just bitter. and cho and cedric...hey, everyone's human. (ps cho better back off...CEDRIC IS MINE!) |
 CrystalxxDreams 9/1/01 . chapter 1I like. I like. Very good. I must say I like the way they all acted in this story. The... Well this was really good. |
 Luinthoron 7/12/01 . chapter 1Nice. Really. Not much to say... |