i would think that lily would be more up in arms about her child being back... but i do like the relationship you've got going with jack and harry. harry seems to act like he was raised by a pirate crew, or at least jacks pirate crew... so good job! keep it up!

Oh come on!

You have to update!

i love it

This is an excelent fic and I liked how acurately you did the accents.Question though... What happened to Hagrid? I don't remember seeing him. If I'm mistaken, then sorry. On the note of what happened in the Great Hall with Jack, the image I get is something about Jack threatening everyone to give him the rum, or else... then getting stupid drunk and talking about his relationship with Will and Elizabeth. Also, for our laughs, he lets a student see his pistol and they accidentaly shoot it at McGonagall. The bullet is reflected, though, because she's wearing an iron corset. XD If the idea's too outlandish, just ignore it... but try to update soon, whatever idea you use.

Ecellent fic!

Pretty good.

i love the way you've portrayed the characters and the way you've kept jack in character. great integration of the two stories. i'm looking forward to see who the orchestrator of it all is. i'm sad to see that the story hasn't been updated in a while, and i hope you haven't abandoned it.

absolutely awesome story and i really hope you continue with it. But could you make Jack and HArry's speech a little bit more understandable. Its awesome and i hope Matt stops being a jerk. 10 out of 10

i hope you will update soon ´cos i like it

No.o.o.o.o..o! Why did it end? Were is the next chapter? Were *cries*?!
I love yar fic ;D totally awesome!
And I think in the great hall Jack dicovered how to make rum ;D You just say 'Rum' and the house elfes bring it to you. That's way he was drunk and the student body was shooting him awed looks. I bet the teachers stoped that though. Because Jack would be drinking then for sure ;D
Well once again I will say briliant fic. Hope you update soon !

So are you ever going to update. You could probably get away with just one more chapter to finish it up. Summarize the rest of Hogwarts and then a short scene showing Jack and Harry on the Pearl or another ship. Or maybe you could have Harry and Jack on a ship discussing everything that happened at Hogwarts while they were there. Please finish this story. It needs to be finished.

Idea behind your plot's pretty good, but so far development of both the story and the characters is pretty flat.. There hasn't been much feeling of impending doom and misery (lol) apart from the old blue-eyed man, who hasn't really been inserted into the story well.. And also, the pace of the fic's too fast! Especially in the introduction of the Hereditary Potion and the 7th year duelling.. I understand that Harry prolly didn't care and wouldn't expect his parents to be James and Lily, but shouldn't he have been more wary about taking such a potion with so many people watching? He's a pirate AND a Slytherin afterall.. *shrugs*
Just need to improve more on these points and I believe your fic will be awesome (: Idea's there, just lacking in proper execution!

before the FUNS fired? it's guns isn't it?

chocomilk and choco cookies are better, do you have any?? and you know a good why for some violance? volde attack, and Harr gets mad when Jack gets hurt. helps? hehe

Great story I can not wait to read more of it. I love it.