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| 4 The Gr8r Good 2008-05-04 ch 8,  | abuseOMG! that was a great fic. Nicely done! definitely one of my faves. =] |
| Lee0616 2008-04-16 ch 8, | abuseAW Usually I don't read Yu-Gi-Oh fics, but this one is SO sweet! ^^ Thank you for such a wonderful story. |
| omasuoniwabanshi 2007-11-20 ch 8, | abuseThanks for writing one of the most enjoyable YGO fics I've ever read. Loved how you connected present day characters to their Egyptian counterparts. Good use of research too such as mention of the cotton clothing. Those sort of details add so much. Even your analogies like "Eyes black as a jackal's onyx statue" were both poetic and historically apropriate. This one's going on my favorites list. |
| booger muncher 2006-11-22 ch 8, | abusethat was an awesome story! i REALLY liked it! :D |
| InsaneDarkness18 2006-08-11 ch 5, | abusegod you sure know how to write a great story! |
| Juh-chan 2006-08-01 ch 8, | abuseIt's... over... Well, I was really curious to see what would happen, but now... It's just... over...:'0( Ok, I know you'll write more fics, and I'll be able to read them all, and like them all, just like it happened with this one. Mana and Mahaado like Serenity?? I didn't expect this... ^^' About Mana and Mahaado toghether, well... I've already said that I prefer her with Atemu, but I liked this end. You can be proud of yourself, it was a wonderful fic!!^.~ You can be shure that I'll read your next ones... Good Luck!! n.n |
| Juh-chan 2006-06-18 ch 7, | abuseWell... I don't have words to describe your fic... It's just perfect! The way you show the character's feelings... it's like you could feel it too... I really loved it, althought I prefer Mana with Atemu, and not with Mahado... Kisses...^^ Wanting anxiously for the latest charapter... Juh-chan^^ |
| Lin Haku 2006-06-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed your story! The character interactions were really wonderful, I could picture everything in my head, and I was crying at certain parts, especially when Mahaado died. I understand the scenes from 30 years ago better now, I never quite did get it. This is a fantastic, moving story, and you must continue to write! |
| Mana 2006-05-23 ch 7, anon. | abusethank you for revealing one of the paths 30 years ago it was a honor being in this story |
| Chinagirl713 2006-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really enjoy your story and I really believe that you should continue it. After all what's the point on starting a story if your not going to stick to it until the end? At least that's what I have always believed. Keep up the good work! |
| Lizzie 2006-05-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseWOW! this is so COOL! i loved it, can't wait to read what's gonna happend next.. keep up the good work! love your story, plz put up chapter 7 soon ! ^^ |
| Jisushika-chan 2006-05-13 ch 1, | abuseHello! I really like the start of this story! ^^ I look forward to continuing it! Jisushika_chan Ps- I joined your DM/DMG group! ^^ There, I am 'jia_jisushika' or maybe 'jjkwok11', either one, anyway |
| Legolas19 2006-02-26 ch 5, | abuseoo interesting story so far, please do update, I can't wait to see where you're planning on going with it. Peace out! -Legolas19 |
| miko 2006-02-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseu must write more i loved it! |
| yamilette 2006-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it!but you need to update more frequently |