I really like your story and was disappointed to see it end. I would have liked to see it continue showing the progress of the relationship between all of them. I've put a story alert in case you decide to add on.

I really loved that! Great job!

Really liked a story with the MM's first encounter with Steph. Thanks-it was great! Seemed very true to what would have happened.

Fun perspective on this scene, and well written!

I really liked this one. I re read it all the time. Will you ever add more?

i like this story. i think you should do more scenes from different pov's. you do a good job

Great perspective! Love it! :)

I loved this oneshot and noticed it says "complete". I'd LOVE to see a follow-up to it. It would make a great longer story. Maybe a sequel one day when you have time, again.

I loved Lester's POV. You wrote him perfectly.

Mag

fantastic, as usual. POVs are tricky. nice one. loved it.

i luv it! dnt make it a oneshot plz! u've reely got something good there!

Great inspiration and translation!

Wonderful! Was this months Top Ten on PFF! Please continue.

that was good.

This says work in progress, so I presume that ur just waiting for Christmas before u gift us with the continuation of this story, right?

I certainly hope so. It's a great start - very intriguing. It's different to take the story from a different person's POV beside Ranger or Steph. Good job - Lester's funny and I'm sure that his thoughts on Steph would have been what ran through any man's. Good job.

Write soon, please... pretty please?

I like that it's written from lesters POV, you gotta write more, soon