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| GooglyMooglies 2007-10-23 ch 6, | abuseit should def not be the end |
| tontto 2007-08-20 ch 6, | abuseYes. I liked this story, so well described, and filled with feelings and thoughts. More, pwease... :P |
| Black Angel Winges 2007-05-21 ch 3, | abuseI do belive that Zoro has just as dirty a mouth as Sanji. They both yell at each other with obsinitys and yet you had a chance to get Zoro out of charcter by saying, "You have a nasty mouth, cook." even though it was just a comment. I do belive it could be ment for the both of them. I really like how you squezzed the kiss in at the end to but if I were Sanji I would have kicked his mugg throw the hull but I'm glad you got him out of charcter (just a little) as well. It wouldn't be a Zoro X Sanji if you didn't! So far I'm in love with your story and can't finish it all now right now. I'll review the remaning chapters later! Thank You! |
| Black Angel Winges 2007-05-21 ch 2, | abuseThats funny! Zoros hard alright. hard in the brain. I bet you he'd didn't realy think of that come back did he. It's really a well writen story. I wish I could write in such detail as you. You make the charcters come to life in my head. Real smooth I must say. Keep it up! |
| Black Angel Winges 2007-05-21 ch 1, | abuseIt was very good. I like it. Really writen well, I must say you are very good at discribing the suroundings as well as the charcters, you have them in fairly good charcter. The part when they entered the vilage made me think of that one episode when they entered Albaster for the first time. You know that distoryed village with skellton sticking out of the ground. yeah that! just wated you to know! |
| Firey Chronicles 2007-02-28 ch 6, | abuseyay~! awsome |
| The Wandering Swordsman 2007-02-14 ch 6, | abuseThat was awesome! If there was such thing as 5 star rating, I'll make this a 5! It was so good! I love these stories! It teared me up. I'm glad that Sanji is starting to 'like' Zoro. I'm gonna' add it to favorites! |
| Verum 2007-01-23 ch 6, | abuseThat was wonderful! I had to bite my lower lip to keep from laughing and scaring the people around me. Well done! |
| laussica 2006-12-23 ch 6, | abuseomg that was so good please writeantoher hcapter i wanna noe wat happens (i noe wat is gonna happen but i want the details lolz) |
| Some Girl101 2006-08-23 ch 6, | abuseThis is either pure art, or just really good. :D It would be cool is you updated. |
| Yaoi-lover 2006-08-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseLMAO OMFG I THINK I'M GONNA DIE OF LAUGHTER~! Zoro screaming I'm hard is now anf forever more stuck in my head! XD I love it so far but I just had to review now! |
| kurah 2006-05-14 ch 6, | abuseAhh, that can't be the end!! |
| mangoleaf 2006-04-09 ch 6, | abuseI love all your works.^_^*beams* Just added this to my fav stroy& author's list. |
| Solesse 2006-02-16 ch 6, | abuseNo!! It can't be the end! we need more juicy story-meat to naw on, and this one was just so good, and so full of flavor! and quitting the creepy meat-comparison, I was really liking this story! it's like, a dissapointing drop off, ya know? you at least need a ...conclusion. yeah. one that will leave room for our ravaging imagionations but won't leave us aching with the heartache of a cliffy. I hate/love cliff-hangers. they're so suggestive and a real pain in the butt. but your story is just begging for more! |
| Ahja Reyn 2006-02-08 ch 6, | abuseVery interesting. I sort of wish this continued on for a few more chapters, but oh well. It was still a good read ^^ |