Ok i'm not really sure who's talking. Maybe it's Bakura who's coming out of the ring and seeing ryou or 'angel'. Duno but i like it anyway.

That was a bit confusing, but good all the same.
Virgo

Again, your poems rock. ^^ I really wish I get get over the block of "poems have to have rhyme and rhythm" that was drilled into my head since first grade. Stupid English book. X.X Poetry is so much better when there are no restrictions.

~Kat

oh, don't stop writing!

I love this!
your writing is so beautiful, it reaches toward the depths of my soul...who knew yugioh was that deep??