Yep made no sense,but thats why we love it! Keep writting! I'm proud of you to! the less sense they make the more we understand someone once told me. I duno if i belive them but for your poem its true.

It doesn't have to make sense to be understood. I don't talk any sense to my friends but they seem to understand. Very good, I liked that one.
Virgo

o I just love this one.
You're a very goot writer I think^_^
You have lots of great ideas.. better than me.
I want to write another YGO but won't work 'cause I don't know anything...
uhm srry to bother you with that*_*
But anyway I just loved the last two sentences you used...

That was cool. Because it could have been from a number of different people I'm aiming at Bakura, Yami, or Seto but either way it still seems really cool and sort angsty.

I liked that poem. was that Bakura, Yami, or Marik speaking?

It does make sense! It's one of the yamis trapped in a Millennium Item I think it ftis in with both Yami and Bakura but mostly with Bakura.

It didn't make any sense but I liked it anyways.^_^

does it MATTER if it makes no sense?! I still wuv it. -hugs poems- so dark, so sad, so wonderful!! -has obsession with Ryou- Yeah, it's good!!

~Kat

o...k now that was beond ** up but i will give u a chance to see were this leads and WHO THE HELL WAS SPEAKING!
but ya i will let u go 4 now but next time my yami will get u
until then i avise u to UPDATE MUWHAHAHHAHAH!

I liked it ^_^