I like your story and would have replied on the other chapters; however, for some reason my computer would not let me open this window.

Your story is really good and is funny in all of the right places. Your choice with Umbridge is so funny.

BLOOD IS NOT BLUE! This is a controversy at my school; however, i have seen the blood that comes out of the body and it isn't blue. Blood is only blue in books and is usually a darker red color when it is deoxygenated. The bright red color comes from the blood that has recently passed through the heart and is on its way to the outer extremities. Just for a reference for future stories.

I have noticed that you have had some trouble with homophones in these two stories and suggest that you watch out for it in the future. :) best of luck in all of your future writing

You are pretty sick in the head. I really think you enjoy killing people. Your morbid sense of destruction will be your downfall. I was really worried about you until I remembered that you were from canada. That explains alot, you actually have alot of talent but choose to squander it on killing and mayhem. I guess you don't realize that most people enjoy the good guys winning, but I understand your lack of sense and lack of backbone, being from the spineless country you are from. Oh well some people just can't be saved! Just try to think before you write and leave some of the death and mayhem out of the story.

great chapter

nothing to ya this is an amazing chapter but its not that cold here in canada lol it started snowing here in december the last few years wich is odd srry i am just rambling amazing story though

After reading the Ist in the series and struggking thruogh the typos and other errors, I began to read this tale.
Your imagination is very good, the storyline (apart from a few weird and confusing character changes) is good but the errors!

Hermione stared at him as if waiting for him to yell out April Fools or something like that but when he didn’t he cracked. Tears starting welding up in her eyes then she suddenly burst out crying. She knew herself to Harry and started sobbing onto his shirt.

he cracked.-He??
Tears starting welding up in her eyes-welding??
She knew herself to Harry and started sobbing onto his shirt.-She threw herself at Harry started sobbing into his shirt.

The above sentense has less than 40 words with 5 errors, the entire story with 165,871 words will at this rate contain 20,0 errors.

Sorry but I can't keep on reading if every 10 words or so I have to quess what you really meant to say.
GET A BETA

I loved your story!! I'm so sad it's finished though.
I really hope you get around to writing another sequel.

good story!

Awesome. I just wish that you'll tell us what Rita S. is plotting. Not to mention what's going on with Cho Chang. Well, onto the next sequel.

Its a brilliant story...I had a lovely time reading it in office... :) You have gr8 imagination & wonderful writing skills...

I KNEW IT! Teather Dae DEaTH EATER!! MWAHHAHAHAHAHAH!

The Letters of Dae Teather spell Death Eater when rearanged don;t they?

“Theys were saying that he-who-must-not-be-named is planning on striking Harry Potter within the week at his home sir.”

“SHIT!” He yelled. “Hide! Everyone just hide!”


hahahahahhahahaha OH CRAP!! lol great!

aw...you almost made me cry(thats really something big, becouse i NEVER cry...atleast the last time i cried was 5 years ago)
anyway, good luck with future stories!

wow-OMG...
i am really strange...it makes me all happy and smiling when you make people die...

lol, to answer you qeustion (it really makes sense to me)
: its cannon based for the first 5 books, and then you have your own 6th and 7th year...and ohyeah you should mention your addiction to killing people off in stories...