I thought the big brother thing was cute. That was good of Nancy to call Tony's boss to let them know there was a problem. Nice chapter...

Love this, just got into ncis stuff and this is excellent!

Very well done! Glad it wasn't a romance! Nice ending!

About time! Thanks!

Wow! I hope everything turns out alright!

Great chapter! Tony is so cool!

Poor man, so sad for him! Hope Tony and Tim are able to stay ahead of him!

Cool chapter! Love Tony' instincts taking over!

Loved it! Loved Tony's plans for the night! Great job!

Awesome story, loved how you worked in each of the characters, especially at the end with the explosion at the hospital. That was quite a surprise.

On your chapter 13: More Questions Than Answers, you said that Ben was thirteen, although previously Tony said he was fourteen. Just wanted to let you know. Great story by the way!

Wow, this was a really great story!! You totally had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. Loved It.

Bravo! I thoroughly enjoyed the story! Loved how it all came together and loved that Tony was a big brother (I'm a big sister!) Maybe he's not such a bad guy after all, lol.

PaulaXan

wow! i love it! ;)

aw. I think its great that you made him a big brother. I hate the fics where they make Tony seem like a spoiled kid.