This is a really nice story. I was kinda fed up and probably still am, with the long A/Ns, especially when there stood 'important' but wasn't important for the story really... Though I guess it may have struck you as such in those days. I think it's sweet that you try to integrate other languages, but sometimes I was either rofl-ing or headdesk-ing because of what you did to the poor German language (especially where capital letters are concerned). Oh, on that topice: "vergeben" actually means "to forgive" and "forgiveness" is "Vergebung". Thought you might like to know ;)
At the beginning, this story didn't strike me as very professional, but interesting enough. It still isn't all that high up on professional list of mine, though that might be because of the ANs annoying me no end... But I like how it turned out, even if the fight with Voldemort was quite anti-climatic, I liked the psycho games he played. Ana was okay, I think, though sometimes she didn't _feel_ quite right. I don't know how to describe it, but maybe she sometimes was just a bit too perfect? The scene I liked her best in was actually when she was flustered (because of Ginny and Malfoy) and didn't tell. Oh well...
All in all, interesting story, great plot and could use a little more fine tuning. Though the length, in the end, was great ;)
Lolchen

I don't know if you already know, but you got the German in this chaper a little wrong. ** would be "Arschlocher", "wenig" is the wrong word, "kleine" would be better. And damn is to be conjugated to "verdammt".
Just wanted to say before I go read more of this delicious stuff ;) I really enjoy it, I'll leave a review once I'm finished!

They're/There/Their

You need a beta reader STAT.

Can't (')


You're (you are)

"You're completely insane."

Your (possessive)

"You have lost your bloody mind."

"I might walk to the new school."

"It is too far to walk."

"The school is two miles away."

To/Too/Two: Words that confuse you easily you might want to keep on post-its near your computer with their respective meanings.

I know you did this story a long time ago, but I'm just finding it now. You indicated at the end of this chapter that you didn't like it, but I wanted to say that it was perfect. The preceding chapter with Logan was a tear-jerker, and this balanced it perfectly. Your writing is really quite good. :)

Angel

decent story, i liked how you incorperated the two worlds, i always thought they worked well in tandem.

some of it was quite predicable, but it was a nice relaxing read.

just one problem. barty crouch jr. (sp?) was able to throw off the imperious eventually but not truth serum

So what happened to Hedwig?

I loved this story. I'm 18, but love X-Men:Evolution and was disappointed when the show ended. I read a lot of slash but a straight fic for once was good. I just finished Harry Potter An Ancients Journey, a stargate sg-1 and atlantis crossover. I'm definitely adding this to my favorites.

Sorry i did not review sooner but I am to caught up in your story to stop reading until now. I was so hopeing you put Logan into this story. And I am glad you did. this is an awesome story and IU like it very much. Please keep up the awesome work.

This story was great! i loved it so much!

This is a good story; one of the better crossover attempts. Your writing style is somewhat amaturish, not unexpected in fan fiction, but the quality of your story overcomes that defect.

I noted a few spelling errors and several instances of gender-neutral but grammatically incorrect useage. (Using a plural pronoun with a singular verb is NEVER correct and detracts from the story's readability. i.e., "I saw the student leave their book on the table." is incorrect. If you saw the student, you know the gender. "I saw the student leave HIS (or HER, if appropriate) book on the table.)

Perhaps the most irritating distraction is the massive "author notes" and review responses in the body of the story. If your story was not so entertaining, these would have caused me to abandon reading it long before now.

ddopp@satx.

That was an amazing story i have to congratulate you on this one i don't think ive ever read something so damn well amazing bravo me and my bro aplaud you.

Don't stop writing if you do i will officially go mad haha (:
and no one likes a mad man now don't go away i'll be right back.

that story is superb
brilliant
amasing
even if u did kill of volldi to soon
i loved the simple plan song youve got me hooked opn them i hadent heard of them befor
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