Oh wow these are beautiful, powerful drabbles you have here. I especially like the third one.

I love the last sentence! lol! There really is nothing like a dog's devotion! lol!

That would surely kill me!
Not knowing that if I looked back he would be watching!

I always wondered if Sesshoumaru regretted ever bringing Rin back to life. Interesting way of seeing though.

Wow, pretty deep!
lol!
I love the way Rin thinks, and the way Sesshoumaru reacts!

That was really good!
I could see Sesshoumaru walking on water! lol!

I feel bad. I read through all the chapters posted of this fic and I knew I was reading it too quickly, just glancing through it really. This story develops simply but I always feel there's something beneath the words that are always open to interpretation. I think it's what you call 'art'.

It says on your profile that you've finished your novel you've been working on. I have to say Well Done! I think you have great potential in the commercial side of writing. But I suppose it's too early to say anything yet. But goodness, I certainly wouldn't mind reading another 'HOTM', so to speak.

I would love to be able to write prose just like the kind you've demonstrated here. To get back to my review, every sentence you write seems to be filled with so much emotion. I haven't been able to completely synchronise with this story; it's as if it's too complex for me to grasp at the moment. I think I'd like to read back over it when I am a bit older and hopefully wiser.

Again, good luck in your endeavours!

wow. i don't even know how to describe this writing technique. i had to read over lines couple of times. i understood, but kept feeling that i wasn't seeing deep enough. you sound wise. that's my overall impression. i prob won't comment again, but please do finish this story. it's been keeping my attention so far.

I came accross this story under the Hidden Treasure category of the the InuYasha fanguild. Boy were they ever right in their naming ! This IS an absolute treasure.
I was always a little leery of the Rin/Sesshoumarou pairing and never read a story featuring this couple. I am glad I decided to read this one though. It just blew me away the images, the pharases, the way the words flow into each other is just absolutely marvelous! The writing style reminds me of Patricia mckillip's, one of my all time favorite authors.
Thank YOu for writing this, this was one of the most beautiful things I have read on this site.

oh wow! I just finshed reading the first chapter, and the weithing style is so different so haunting. wow! Good job

This whole thing is stunning.

It's so painful, and beautiful, to watch the entwining of their lives and souls, their reactions to and thoughts about each other and their situation. Really wonderful. And of course, I love the last line, "There is nothing like a dog's devotion." I also loved the chapter with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha, and made me achingly curious to see if either of them will meet their loved ones again in this story's universe.

Thanks for writing!

I love the story and you haven't update since 06..that's krazii3!!please update soon it will be very much appreciated!

Really good, but a little sad!!

All of these are so... so... I don't know. Reading each one makes me want to cry. Beautiful.

This is a beautiful machination of words - a different take on the poetry, because who has ever written of Rin rebelling? Resenting? You type your phrases so prettily, and we eagerly await your next installment.