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aDATEwithAdream
2008-06-22
ch 5,
abusewow. i don't even know how to describe this writing technique. i had to read over lines couple of times. i understood, but kept feeling that i wasn't seeing deep enough. you sound wise. that's my overall impression. i prob won't comment again, but please do finish this story. it's been keeping my attention so far.
jasmine lotus
2008-03-22
ch 8,
abuseI came accross this story under the Hidden Treasure category of the the InuYasha fanguild. Boy were they ever right in their naming ! This IS an absolute treasure.
I was always a little leery of the Rin/Sesshoumarou pairing and never read a story featuring this couple. I am glad I decided to read this one though. It just blew me away the images, the pharases, the way the words flow into each other is just absolutely marvelous! The writing style reminds me of Patricia mckillip's, one of my all time favorite authors.
Thank YOu for writing this, this was one of the most beautiful things I have read on this site.
jasmine lotus
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseoh wow! I just finshed reading the first chapter, and the weithing style is so different so haunting. wow! Good job
Amaru06
2008-01-25
ch 8,
abuseThis whole thing is stunning.

It's so painful, and beautiful, to watch the entwining of their lives and souls, their reactions to and thoughts about each other and their situation. Really wonderful. And of course, I love the last line, "There is nothing like a dog's devotion." I also loved the chapter with Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha, and made me achingly curious to see if either of them will meet their loved ones again in this story's universe.

Thanks for writing!
Krazi3-AnimeLover
2008-01-09
ch 8,
abuseI love the story and you haven't update since 06..that's krazii3!!please update soon it will be very much appreciated!
Reika
2007-12-26
ch 8, anon.
abuseReally good, but a little sad!!
deity of death1
2007-12-25
ch 8,
abuseAll of these are so... so... I don't know. Reading each one makes me want to cry. Beautiful.
Novocain
2007-11-26
ch 8,
abuseThis is a beautiful machination of words - a different take on the poetry, because who has ever written of Rin rebelling? Resenting? You type your phrases so prettily, and we eagerly await your next installment.
sugarsweet pie
2007-10-17
ch 2,
abuseAt the beginning, this reminded me of the novel, "As I Lay Dying". One of the perceptions narrated in the book tells of a young boy and a fish, and its similarity with his dying (then dead) mother. I love that book. I also love your writing. That Rin would ask herself what pain is for everyone when she is this old, is perplexing. Having Sesshoumaru still so distant towards her hurts even more.
sugarsweet pie
2007-10-17
ch 1,
abuseAwesome T_T What words can describe brilliance? Having read "The House of the Moon" months ago but beleiving you had not uploaded anything else was a big mistake. Your imagery and poetic narration is gorgious. Especially this chapter; it is like prose. Beautiful T_T I should have checked out the rest of your work long before.
BlackMoonWhite
2007-10-09
ch 8,
abuseBeautiful, beautiful, beautiful writing. I love the ideas you bring up, your prose, the focus on the slightly bittersweet side of their relationship, everything is top-notch! Wonderful writing!
HawkAngel XD
2007-07-15
ch 8,
abusereally cool, update soon please!!


au revoir!


HawkAngel
Vespera
2007-06-05
ch 2,
abuseVery beautiful, very poignant parallel between the emotional capacity of which a fish and demon are capable. You can really feel Rin's frustration and resignation.
OneInuLuver
2007-03-19
ch 8,
abuseI read your story after the Inuyasha guild posted the link with you award announcement. All I can say is...beautiful,hauntingly beautiful.
Congratulations on your win and continued literary success to you!!
NB
2007-03-18
ch 8, anon.
abuseLoved that last line. Perhaps it isn't merely a human condition, trying to deny our nature for reasons good and bad.
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