NICE

I LOVE IT!

well would u make more ?

PLZ

HEY, SASUKE'S CINDERELLA OMG

hahahaa

I BET NARUTO ACTS BETTER THAN SASUKE even naruto farts

anyway make more story about sasusaku

:)

OMG! LOL! I LOVE IT!

That was so FUNNY!

that was awesome. The scene with Kiba and Chouji plus Shino was priceless. Sasuke and Neji sure hate each other even in a story ha ha!

Oh god, that was hilarious! XD

NICE! I could probably re-read this story over and over again lol. Really funny. *thumbs up* Love the Neji and Shino stuff where they say “Hurray, hurray…we’re going to see the Prince…” Neji and Shino repeated, but Neji was annoyed that he had to say a line like this.

Anyways good job!

TDN3

Hey intrestingly humorou story, but it's just i have one question, why did you insist on putting on all sorts of japanese phrases, it just sometimes ruined it not made it more realistic...honeslty you could've just wrote it in english "Shut up" isn't hard to write instead of "urusai!" Just makes you seem like a wanna be oh by the way they don't say "bonzai" after a play! if using japanese use it properly

ohmigosh, I couldn't stop laughing this is really good, you should do another one, like snow white or something, but this was really good.

lolx...i liked the part when kakashi made the changes and when iruka held up the sign

Nice! It kills me! (It's funny!)

That was EXTREMELY HILARIOUS, FUNNY, HUMOROUS, WITTY, COMICAL, ENTERTAINING, CLEVER, AND...

!

INSTANT FAVE! HAHAHAHA-

(Ugh, you've made me wet my pants...grr...)

Although I wetted my pants-I mean, Although I spotted some grammatical errors (critical errors I suppose) NO ONE CAN GET AWAY FROM THE POWER OF HUMOR!

Great job and I salute you for it. (salutes)...*hand hits forehead* And I don't mind if It's too long...as long as it's funny, I don't mind the length!

Ouch...

Oh yeah, I'm gonna visit your gallery in deviantart; can you visit mine? well, it's here:

ashira-chan-jay.

See 'ya!

(I was too lazy to sign in...

THAT WAS SO FUNNY

LOL this was awesome!