Made me smile. Big time. Oh my god, I can't describe it. You're going on my favorite authors list. I loved how you described each character so easily and truly. I loved each different metaphor, and as I read on they just kept stronger and truer. Amazing work. I loved it!

yes indeedy, love is blind. your choices for the different characters 'perceptions' were spot on :) great work, yet again.

did you make dylan blind or something? i'm a little confused i get the others but you kept saying that dyan looked at the world through a blind fold, that he couldn't see only hear and trust,i'm cnfused and it's not good for mwe at 3:12 in the morning

What a truely insiteful story this is. Each imagery was true to their characters. Thank you for such an amazing piece of work.

sara

Good
very good
i like your one shots though they are mostly fluffy.

interesting. i smiled. powerful analagies...impressive. looking forward to more of ur work. -alex

Made me smile. No, scratch that...Made me grin. ^-^

~ Val

so much more SMILE than SICK. :D

Big fan and you know it.

please keep writing more... because i live off of these like other people live off air.

I loved it. I didn't really see anything that needs improvement at this time but if I do I will let you know. Oh yeah, and please conintue.

Peace

I really liked this quite creative! :)

Holy. Smokes. How do you do it?! That was so awesome, so beautiful, so amazingly accurate. You got each character down perfectly. Though I loved Marco and Dylan, and Ellie and Spinner, Paige's was definitely my favorite description. They were all wonderful and omfg please NEVER stop writing. Your stories are so awesome!