OMG SUCH A SAD BUT GOOD STORY. i felt so bad for foxie. it kinda made me want to like not cry but...well i'm confused right now so...anyway it was a real good story...i really liked it

That literely made me cry.Seryesly the tears wer right ther...BUT I DID WHAT FALCO SED AND ACTCHUALY DIDNT LET ONE TEAR FALL!I nearly did afeu times but I didnt!
I haet...that stupid whiporwhil...

I read this once before, a long time ago. It's still beautiful, amazingly touching from beginning to end. I want to cry with them. For them. With a few changes of detail, this could be it's own story, without the fancharacters. Simply amazing. If I could get into my account, I would put it on my favorites list.

That was simply beautiful. So sad... A lovely story!

*cries for Fox and Falco* Sad, but beautiful story. That whole thing about the whippoorwill kind of reminds me of this story i read in middle school called "The Scarlet Ibis" (though the two main characters were brothers)

OMG! That's was so amazing!! You should seriously consider becoming an author. That was so sad. Kinda like Romeo and Juliet o'course I admit I've never read the true book lol^^;; just know the basic story. But this still kicks it's **! Fwee^^ Go Nepnep!
Sincerely
~THE GamerPheonix8

so sad ;_; and it's a sweet beatiful sad!! Because the writing is so beatiful *-* It descends and ascends and it's like a big rollercoaster but so much better and more calm. Flowers freaks on rollercoasters... n_m

This is your best ever *tear*

Umm, i don't really have any suggestions, except i think there's a lack of quotation marks somewhere, or is that a style for the person to person point of view?...o_o

Yay!! :D

O__O; -jawdrop-
Utterly amazing. I love the way this is written, and it is so very well done. I.. woah. -dies-

* claps * love the story brought tears to my eyes as well * wipes them away *