what happen to kurama?

I am officially curious as to what had happened to Kurama...is there going to be another story for him?

For a thirteen year old, THIS WAS PURE GENIUS!

i just read it out of curiousity it's not bad especially considering how long ago you wrote it. i don't know the manga/animae so i don't really know the characters.
the writing's good though you have most certainly improved(i read you axelxyuffie one--it's so good and i loved the dialougue). i know you said you didn't want more comments on it but i don't mind being a minnor annoyance. it's fun. and it's cool seeing how people improve. your writing is very descriptive here but your later works have imo more depth though. all in all i like it.
oh and i'm writing some kh fanfics yes this is self promotion but if you wouldn't mind checking 'em out. one centers largely around yuffie cause she's one of my favorite characters.

LOL@YAMMERHAMMER. FTMFL.

LOLOLOLOLOLOL.

Anyway, I understand your aggravation (well, kind of. If good ol' Yammerhammer reviewed my... lovely... eleven-year-old fic, I'd totally be there). Looking back at this, you've come a hell of a long way, Pen. I read this story and I'm not disappointed - even at thirteen, you weren't a bad writer. But where this leaves off, there's definitely room for improvement, and then looking at The Need to Know, A Fine Line, Strong Silent Type? You've tackled every single thing that's problematic in this story and more or less shanked the bloody things. It's really, truly amazing.

;D UBHAPPEYNAOYES?

LOL.

Forgot to add:
Joke, joke. Thanks for the fic. It was a fun read.

Stray Fox, wherefore art thou? O.o

TELL US ALREADY. What the hell happened to Kurama? He sounds like an escaped mental patient!

Omg, this is the best. I couldn't stop laughing, and it flowed smoothly without dragging on and on... This is the best!

HieBotani XD for EVER! >D

Botan feels more like a creepy stalker now... D:

Seems a bit unrealistic. I never gauged Botan to be a pervert, or enough of one to let perversion override common sense. In the series, I always perceived Botan to be the one with the most common sense, actually... Beside maybe Kurama, but then again that guy doesn't just have common sense--he's a freaking genius! She's bubbly, but she's no idiot, and that's why I've always respected her character.

But I digress. The point is, seems a bit OOC for Botan to randomly decide to hop into Hiei's bed, especially with all those years of experience she has as a ferry girl, as well as being in danger before many times.

However, I am interested in this plot's premise. Perhaps if the plot twists become more clever, I'll find myself relaxing more.

Awesome Fic!

finished! :) that was some cliffy... what actually happened to kurama? good job here!

awwe, i love this chapter :D
Score: Hiei: 5,798,352, Kuwabara: 0.
i could almost imagine Hiei's laughter!
kay, i'm off to read the next chapter~

This was AWESOME!
I love it!! Everything was just so perfect and the way it progressed was ah-mazing! It was realistic, in my eye at least.. lol. Once again, I love this totally awesome story!
Hiei/Botan forever!!

O.O ...I read this story yesterday, and I still want to read it over again. MAN, this story ROCKS! I dunno what it is about it, but I ab-so-lutely love it. ^_^ I actually can picture the entire length of chapter 10 in my head... Excellent. Job. ...That's all I can say.