Reviews for Moonlight Becomes You

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Alvilda 2008-06-01 ch 36,	abuseNext please! ;)
Snuffles-sweetie 2007-12-16 ch 9,	abuseHE'S ALIVE!oh yay!!does happy dance...jack's alive,jack's alive...nananannanaa..in your face corbin...haha suck on that!...ermm...sorry bout that...yah...luved this chapter!
HavingSaidThat 2007-05-25 ch 36,	abuseBrilliant!! On to your next story now... Thank you for this captivating story. ~HavingSaidThat~
Allacaya 2006-08-04 ch 36, anon.	abuseAw - last chapter. How sad. I liked it. Actually I liked Bessie better in this story. In the beginning, she was so fragile? In any case always scared or crying etc. (probably not always, but that's what I recall)I like the way you had her mature. I like Jack's portrayal, too. Don't mind him being "not that nice". I was wondering - when they were in Port Royal, Bessie and the kids, did they play with the Turner kids? Them being roughly the same age and the parents friends? Are you writing more?
Allacaya 2006-08-04 ch 10, anon.	abuseHmm he did take a cursed coin - whyever that - I missed it completely ah well half a life is better than nothing. Thomas, Thomas, courting Bessie so soon after she is widowed...
Allacaya 2006-08-04 ch 9, anon.	abuseAhh you don't know how tempted I am to peek to the end of the story to check my Jack Sr. theory is correct... haha serves me rigth reviewing before reading the chapter - shark hole in the shirt... Barbarossa... Tada! I was correct! Takes mor'n a bloody welshman t'take out a Sparrow, savvy? Drat I'm rubbish at dialects...
Allacaya 2006-08-04 ch 3, anon.	abuseGot me hooked again - I was confused with the time at first though - thought you meant 2 years after story 1 that Pearl was 2 and the twins one. But she is 9 now, is she? Fail to see how a 1 year old could be sent anywhere to give news (ah the brilliant deductions one's mind is able to make at times...) Jack is not dead - It would be very un - sparrow - like to die simply of a pistol shot. (when he survived already the Kraken... (: ). Plus, you did never specify where he was hit exactly. Plus, how can he remember everything is black - when he's dead -if he died you'd phrase it differently. Now it's like a flash back memory from somewhere in the future to now. Savvy?
Ally 2006-02-19 ch 36, anon.	abuseExcellent! I have to compliment you Hils, all of your stories are well written. Your plots are the best and I am in absolute awe with the fact that you maintain a well structured storyline and all of the characters are, in fact, in character. I can read your work over and over again (I am so addicted it isn't even funny!) and I can never get tired of reading it. You are the best potc fanfic writer I have ever had the pleasure of coming across. Your work is the best I've come across on this website for the past 4 years so I do hope that you will continue writing, especially after this movie's sequel. I can only hope that you will continue to entertain all of us that absolutely LOVE this genre with your excellent work. With all the best, Ally.
Sauruna 2005-11-27 ch 36, anon.	abuseNew story new story new story! Euh... please?? (inclusive ** course!!)
Sauruna 2005-11-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseI'd better hope for your own safety he's isn't really dead!
rock n roll star 2005-09-17 ch 36,	abuseOh! I have just spent the entire week reading all your bleeding stories, and I loeved everyone! You should make a sequal to this, or something! And might I add that the ending to the Kitty Series made me cry! You are a great author, and should maybe try to get a few stories published. Maybe one day you could look into mine, and see what a dolt and hopeless romantic I am! Thanks for being a great author! Christina
Bookworm848 2005-09-10 ch 36, anon.	abusejoy! ...I'd leave a more constructive review, but I just finished a marathon reading of all your fics. ...I'm not quite certain how long I have been reading actually. lesse... it's saturday now, I last left my dorm room (barring picking up takeout) er... Thur no wait, Wednsday! However, I wasn't reading your stuff that whole time. I think I slept once while reading these stories. So best guess, a day and a half to two and a half days. Riveting.
BabyBoy1 2005-08-22 ch 1,	abuseHilary: you are indeed a most talented writer! I've rad all of your Kitty stories, and finally have finished the last Bessie stories (Moonlight Becomes You) that I see listed under FanFic options on the OhJohnny website. Since you wrote these stories months/years ago, I don't know that a review from a johnny-come-lately (pun intended?) reader such as myself means much. However, if you are still reading these reviews, I wanted you to know how very much I appreciate your plots, dialog, and the whole shebang. I must say, however, that I was most disappointed with Gibbs' demise in the Kitty stories. Also, for much of the first Bessie series, I worried what end you had planned for her (and then the children!) so Jack could later be with Kitty. Took me awhile to realize that you weren't dovetailing the two sagas! Again, thank you for everything! If there is any more forthcoming, please make sure to get the tale to me!
Spirit of the Sky 2005-07-24 ch 36,	abuseOk...I just read all off your stories over the past week and they were all amazing! You have an incrdible talent for writing and it shows! Your characters all seem so real and the plots are a perfect mix of romance and action. I hope you plan on writing some more! You're like my favorite author! I'll be keeping an eye out for any future works you submit. Thanks for giving me a week's worth of excelent reading! TTFN Spirit of the Sky
Ducky007 2005-06-12 ch 36,	abuseYay! I loved the story...are you planning to continue and ad another story to Bessie and Jack's asventures?

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