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| MysticWolf1 2007-03-30 ch 2,  | abuseWow! Great story! I was a bit doubtful when I realized it was from Jonathan's pov, but the primise had me curious so I read on, and I am glad I did. |
| Andraste2 2005-11-24 ch 2, | abuseWow! This has got to be THE best smallville story by far. I love it. Andraste |
| Lucy Wiggin 2005-06-04 ch 2, | abuseWow! I'm very impressed with your story telling abilities, and your explanation of the BlackK is better than what was given in the show:-) Keep it going! Yours Lucy |
| baseballfan44 2005-05-28 ch 2, | abuseThis was definatly the best story I have read on here. It was really effective how you did it from Jonathan's POV. I also liked how you were able to work some funny events in this story, like when Martha, Jonathan, and Clark all fell over while hugging, even though this wasn't exactly a comedy. All in all, really great story, please write more! |
| Sakura123 2005-02-16 ch 2, | abuseThis has to be the best Smallville story I've ever read! I absolutely loved the way you wrote this, the descrption from Jonathan's POV was excellent the plotline or storyliine was awsome and Overall the entire story in one chapter formate was a blast to read, espically the part when Jonathan described Chloe being white as a sheet just witinessing something that would defiantly be on her wall of werid. This could be just the excitment talking, but I could read this story may three more times (after the excitment wears off), but unfortantly I have things to do and stories to write. The only problems I had with this story was the format. At times It lookes a bit too jumbled to read but I managed to get through it. Good job! Sakura123~ |
| HAD1 2004-12-05 ch 2, | abusei really really loved the story |
| isolation923 2004-11-29 ch 2, | abusewow, that was an awsome story. i luved every part of it. in particular, i think writing from first person perspective was very effective. i loved the plot, especially the battle scenes, they were great. all in all, a great story, i cant wait to read more of your writing. keep it up, you're good. |
| GinaRenee 2004-11-28 ch 2, | abuseThat was AMAZING. I would so love to see this on the show! Great plotting, and even better, you've captured the Kent family dynamic perfectly. I love how you wrote it in Jonathan's voice (which you also captured really well), and I love that you brought Bart back and let Chloe find out the secret as well. Beautifully done! Will there be a sequel? |
| anywbshowlover 2004-11-27 ch 2, | abusep;ease write more. |