Really loved it! :D

I was laughing out loud alone!

Butt... elbow! WTH ! :D

Nicely done!

Nyxia

OMG! I'm LMFAO now and my canine children at looking at me with "What the-?" expressions on their faces!

Elbow . . . Butt! Ha! As soon as I read that, I knew it must be Twister or some such game. I could just picture Birkoff's expression when he heard them, then walked in on them!

Ahh, Birkoff . . .

My god. Anything funnier. Too bad that Birkoff had the wrong idea. Hell I had the wrong idea.

That was so funny. I knew they were playing twister. Really. Okay maybe not.

Very cute. I liked it. Good work on such a short piece, and the *twist* ending was nice.

Very good,very good. please write a follow up

Pretty good for a first 'fic! more please! :-)

LOL!

Isn't Twister fun?

*bursts into hysterical giggles*

Lol!

Hysterical! I loved it!