This is a great fic to follow Fray. Some of the people making Fray-fics have no clue about the background. I thought Saffron would be a slayer because one was dead (Harth). Please continue this!

Hey! This is freakin' awesome! Don't stop! COntinue!

told you i would reveiw others of your works, i just realized when i looked at your name that you also wrote this BoP thing about BC getting side stepped for the salvant(sp?) that i didn't review cause i wasn't finsihed an lost the link. anyway, i just read Fray a few weeks ago and i really liked it too, this is a great fan-fic to follow it. i really like it and i think that its only inprovment is that you give some backround on the Order of Sage and the demon that Saffron saw. other then that great work, i think i'll go try another fan fic of yours since most of your favorite comic people i really like 2, so on to reading another

The first half was intriguing. At first I thought Saffron, with her memories of past lives, was another Slayer (after "Chosen" presumably there could be lots of them in the future) but now I'm not so sure. Kicking myself that I didn't figure out where Fornia was.
The second half was great - you definitely have a way with cliffhangers. If I was to take a wild guess I'd say you're putting together a futuristic Legion Of Super-Slayers, but then again I thought Proserpexa was going to turn out to be Glory so what do I know.

This is awesome. I love Fray stories, probably because there aren't a whole lot of them. This is definitely a good one. Keep up the good work and don't give up on it.

Great start. I'm surprised that there's not more Fray fanfiction on (this is only the third I've come across). You did a good job of summarising the Fray comic book and your choice of Watcher is pretty impeccable. Looking forward to whatever happens next.