   opicool 10/9/11 . chapter 1I really liked this story! Really simple yet beautiful. Great job! :) |
| Bibliophile Music Addict 10/1/05 . chapter 1 Very sweet and cute story. I'd like to see what ahppened after the kiss. |
| kaname 8/5/05 . chapter 1 aw |
| Kyoko The Red Butterfly Honda 3/5/05 . chapter 1 wow...that was beautiful |
| DragonGirl 1/30/05 . chapter 1 *sniff* so...so..touching and beautiful! |
| Zeon of the Twilight Blade 1/10/05 . chapter 1 AAW!
and that says it all. |
| KcluvsMl 12/3/04 . chapter 1 I. LOVED. IT. |
| rachelk 12/1/04 . chapter 1 aww. that was so cute. plz make it longer though! : ) |
| Venom Malfoy 11/30/04 . chapter 1 Aw! That was so sweet! I have a sudden urge to run and draw a picture of that. |
| Darkness-Chill 11/30/04 . chapter 1 This was so cool. I love it. Its way better than anything I've ever written! I love it! Oops I already said that... |
| Foresaken-Shadow 11/29/04 . chapter 1 Aww! Tis soo good! Such a nice little story :) I love the D/S couple :D |
| autumngold 11/28/04 . chapter 1 What a sweet story! I love Danny and Sam's kiss! |
| UniqueWolfLover 11/28/04 . chapter 1 Sweet! That was so cute! I love it! |
| blueblackangel 11/28/04 . chapter 1 aw...that was great...great details!did i mention that i luv it |
| MysticBlue 11/28/04 . chapter 1 It was ok, but nothing spectacular. You need to learn how to write before you try to. The entire first paragraph sounds like you're trying to be poetic or use sophisticated words, but it ends up leaving the reader confused. This story would have been better if you had made your word choice simpler. |
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