really good so far, please update?

Elladora? Finished already your non writing period? It would be great news if it is over...
Why not try something else on this couple? there is so little about them...

Ex Libris

good story. i'm interested to see what happens. update soon

Hey! Personally I love the story and hope you'll update soon! :)

Very nice, well-constructed, but I found it a little confusing as to who was speaking to whom at times ... I absolutely loved Andromeda's comment about prepositions.

Thank you for updating!!
Interesting chapter, very nicely written. The fist few paragraphs - describing the feast - had a great style. At the same time, I loved the rivalry present in the dialogue between Ted/Andromeda.

Oh wow! This is great! Why haven't you continued?!

Anyway, that aside, this is great. Lots of hooks, it's ver nice to read -and you really want to read more (pointed look). Seriously, it is a pity you've stopped, but that's your choice.

Great story!

Tania

it's mwa ha ha ha
not mwahah
duh
beaytiful keep going

Great story. Actually I have enjoyed all of your stories, I love your style of writing and the way you portray the Blacks. Keep up the good work

Wow! i like this a lot. It's different and black fics are amazing! Update soon.

well, i havent read your other blackfics yet, but im going to now. this is a pretty good start, i like how all the blacks are acting like blacks, and andromeda and sirius arent just the rebellious teens. cant wait for an update!

Very good!! Lately I've fallen in love with the story of the Black family. And I just recentley posted a story on Bellatrix and why she did everything that she did to Sirius and everyone else. Please check it out and tell me what you think. I would really appreciate it!! And update soon!!