*cries* Whaa... so sweet, and so sad. I love this pairing above all others in the book, and was so mad when they were the only ones not to completely fall for each other. You capture them so well - their voices, their mindset, and their desperate, confusing love for each other. I hope to see more from you soon.

OMG... this is pretty much perfect. I'm off to read more. Your narrative voice is perfect, as is the characterization, and the kiss on the forehead had me squealing. I can never find good Lost Souls fic. Yours is the first I've read.

Wow, this story is great.

I never really liked fanfiction of Lost Souls, but I like this story.

You manage to capture Ghost and Steves personalities very good.

I hope you decide to continue this story someday, there really aren't enough good fanfiction of Lost Souls.

OMG i loved this story! you need to update even though you haven't in 2 years? O_O

anyway LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Fucking beautiful, such a deep love for the characetrs that really comes though in the telling, can't wait to read more

Sorta left me hanging, there. Was that the end? Either way, that was a really good read. The characterisations were really good, near perfect. The writing, especially in the first two chapters, was lovely. The dynamic between the two of them was beautiful. The only things weird things I can see are that 'at least' is NOT one word, and I don't think Ghost swears that much. Of course, it's been nearly four days since I read the book (yes, new and passionate fan, here) so I may be wrong on that.

Anyway! Thank you mucho, I liked it very much!

Holy shit. I cant belive that it took me this long ot find and read this wonderful fan fiction! I love it, I love it, I love it! I thought that the vague tie-in with Drawing Blood was especially cool 'cause I just finished the book last night (and am still basking in the glory of the slightly fucked up trevor/zach fluff. You have a writing style similar to Dean Koontz, so I hope you make as much money as he does if you ever take writing as a career.

Sweet! This si do good! I'm really enjoying reading it!

wonderful, please continue! one of the most well written, belivable S/G fics out here. much love!

PLEASE update!

i LOVE the way u write Poppy's characters. i'm not a big fan of StevexGhost, but this is REALLY good stuff! _

MORE! XD

i love Ghost-angst over Steve. _

What happens in the hotel room, huh?

or when they DO get home?

he hasn't got a broken rib or anything has he?

please please please please please please write more! pleasee?

I loved it so much! *_* But, are you going to write more? I'd like to read a bit more. :

please continue writing this story. i lovet alot and i'd like to read more. please? thanks a lot!

um...there will be more right? RIGHT? That was a rather abrupt ending if there's no more. I really like it though...but...gah! that better not be the end!