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| Hard-boiled Egg Devils 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseEntertaining and bi-lingual, I appreciate that. Bravo. Is Kimi going to be a new member. Because if she is, she needs a cool name; like Numbuh...Numbuh...Numbuh... Okay, I can't think of anything...yet. But it'll come to me. |
| Hard-boiled Egg Devils 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseHmm, not bad, not bad. I'm a little old for KND, but I like the story. Just be sure to inform Kimi about Abby's "hobby". |
| Powerpuff 2006-08-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseI hope the KND that stand for Codename: Kids Next Doors will find out where the Adult villian had Kimiko or Kimi. |
| NotAnOrdinaryGirl624 2006-08-12 ch 5, | abusePlz keep writting the story. It's really good! |
| Cyrix 2005-01-17 ch 5, | abuseGreat story! Update soon! I hope The KND saves Kimi. :) |
| shadowedstar213 2004-12-17 ch 5, | abuseOMG! AWESOME SO FAR! UPDATE SOON PLEASE! |
| A. Nonymous 2004-12-16 ch 5, anon. | abuseThe day after tomorrow is when I leave on a trip & won't be back till the end of the month. So I'm sorry to say that I might miss out on story updates (unfortunately). I'll try to review the story (if I miss out on anyhing) the moment I get back. So, Merry Christmas (in advance). |
| A. Nonymous 2004-12-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseNobody likes threats, but I think Wallabee deserved being attacked by his freinds like that for his attitude. I like your physical descriptions of each villain. You have to feel sorry for Toilenator, he tries to be the best villain he can be, but the other villains seem to look down on him. I bet Toilenator was MORE than excited to take the job he was given (he probably doesn't get to participate in many villain plans). I wonder whether Kimiko is REALLY inside the box, I'll have to find out later. Bye, then. |
| shadowedstar213 2004-12-11 ch 4, | abuseWow... fab story! Update soon please! |
| A. Nonymous 2004-12-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseI'll start with the thing I liked the most, when Kimiko's mom gives her the diary for her childhood experiences (because if she was to lose her memory, the diary will preserve her moments). I'm also glad that Kimiko will still stop by to help the family when they need it. I want to make a correction for the story; Mr. Uno plays a Sousaphone, not a saxophone (I hope I spelled "sousaphone" right). The way that Wallabee was acting towards Kimiko, he DESERVED to get a get a Game Over when he took his concentration away from it. I'm betting that Knightbrace is one of the ones who kidnapped Kimiko. I think it would be neat if you brought Mushi into the story, just a suggestion. In the story, Kimiko's mom talked about how her mother (Kimiko's grandmother) treated her. It reminded me a lot of a TV show I watch on the WB Channel called "Gilmore Girls". One of the main characters, named Lorelei [pronounced Lor-reh-lie] has a mother who acts in a bit of a similar way to the grandmother in your story. Have you ever heard of this show? @ That's all I have to say for now. Until next time. |
| me 2004-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like your story, even though I just read the first chapter. Good job. I just need to read the first sentence to know if it is good or not. You are one of those writer that is real good, because I read the first few sentences and it was good. Keep up the good work! |
| Hellenaa66 2004-12-02 ch 4, anon. | abuseMore chapters Please! I want to know what will happen! ~Hellenaa66 |
| Someone 2004-12-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseI Like your story. Lets have more chapters! Don't worry, you got Japenese to English all right, I think(I am also not that good at translation) But for Chinese, You should put "Wo zou de", that make it much more better. I Know Japenese and Chinese also. Someone who likes your story and is a girl. |
| BunnyLover123456777 2004-12-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseI Like your story. Good job bring Knightbrace back. Can you not put any love between Numbuh One and Five. I Do not like that. Anyway, I can't believe you speak Japenese. I speak it too! But how do you know Chinese? Why did you put chapter two in Kimi's point of view? Anyway, good job on your first story. Bye! ~ILoveBunnys |
| A.Nonymous 2004-12-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseI wanted to add on to my last review. I want you to know that I never REALLY asked for you to not let Kimiko join the KND, I was ONLY offering my opinion. Just wanted you to know that. |