This is lovely, I must say. The characterisations are fantastic and the mood you created was beautiful and dark. Excellent writing; it stands alone as a single chapter even if it has been put on hold.

I do like the way you portrayed them both, very believable. I like how their interaction is not quite a friendship but is a bit comfortable all the same. The burden of the Order is conveyed so easily in such small sentences. It's lovely hon. I do hope you continue soon!

This looks very good so far. I hope you plan on continuing

I figured I would review since no one else has. I adored this little fic, and I really wish you would consider continuing. I love Sirius/Emmaline, and this is just so adorable.
-Cole