I like. Rather existentialist, but maybe that's just me. The tinge of ennui is fitting, and everything just fits so well to be wrapped up in that last little section.

Wow.

A very hot story indeed. You've got me so confused I don't know who's after whom and why. But that just seems so natural. Like how the characters themselves might be feeling.

That pace and the structure of this story are great. Your sense of time is excellent, the transitions completely smooth. I felt like I could smell the chlorine and hear the sounds of an indoor pool from your description of the building. Not to mention the whole school and colony environment. Nice touches, like Colony Woman and weather, make that.

Appropriate that I was just mourning the decline of the art of sexual tension in the media, and then lifts their uploading halt and I run into this. What can I say but that this _easily_ ranks up there with the best, most tense and emotionally touching yuri fics in my experience? I will never look at Relena and Sylvia the same again.

“Snapped one of those strings, didn’t I?”
A deliciously loaded sentence. (And an OC I could get into.)

Thanks for the wonderful read. I would definitely recommend this story to others.