I applaud you.

Aww! I love how he meant to break up with her but instead wound up telling her he loved her. Mishaps like that pwn. :D

Sweet, and the Marauders made me laugh- "Naked Snape!" Sirius does indeed win at life. I also like that Peter has a personality ;) and "Hairy Potter" made me snerk. James' declaration of love was also very cute. Thanks :)

I really enjoyed this; what a great one shot!
Also, brilliant Strong Bad quote. It made me giggle a bit.
~Kat

Quite amusing. I thank you, as does whatever it is that has me awake at such an ungodly hour of the morning.

Marry me now! No, I'm just kidding, but that was absolutely perfect. I adored the interaction between the Marauders (it has to be illegal for people to be that funny), and the James/Lily stuff was just as good. There's no arguing with fate I suppose. But the best moment of all was the Homestar Runner reference made my life. I can't wait to devour your other fics. You're hilarious.

it sort of rocked

Aw. How sweet. Very funny. Hm. I think I rather liked it. Nice work.
Grade : B+

I understand that it is both unorthodox and unromantic to propose to someone in a reviw, and even more so since the proposal is based upon the persons ability to write brilliant fan fiction. So be it. will you marry me? I'm quite convinced we'd make a great couple. you'd write, I'd read. what more could one posibly want. er. all jokes aside, I'm deeply and officially in awe of your writing skills. I should be used to them by now but I'm not. big thank yous and chocolate frogs for posting your stories here, and I hope you'll contine writing in the future. /terry.

Joshy sometimes I really hate you. Now is one of them. I liked this. Hey, it's cool. I still maintain that your flat refusal to put sex in yoru stories is mean but your nonetheless an excellent writer. So you know, I've officially gone and done. I'm writing a Harry Potter fanfiction. You're going to have to go read it. It's even somehwat popular. One chapter and already at 7 reviews, and only ONE day.

Lol, great story, lol James's logic!

Quite a cute one-shot. I like L/J, but only in small doses, and I like you're funny, clear writing style. It's entierly without frills, and to-the-point while being quite hilarious. Excellent job, goingto read more of your stuff now. Seriously.

ESP

P.S. 'The scroll. The scroll. The button. The button. Scrollin' so smooth like the butter on the muffin.' -You know who.

I was quite entertained by your ficlet, esp. the part about:

"Everyone will want the Hairy Potter look!"

That was classic.

lol, very sweet. a one-shot right? good work. :D

aww... this is cute. is it a one shot though? well, yeah just wanted to say i really like it and it doesn't have any mistakes (at least that i caught) and the writings good and the plots good and it's just perfect how it is!